增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出 修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
My brother has been fond at building things since he was a kid. After earning a degree in computer science, he has developed software for different businesses. With his childhood dream in mind, he eventual quit the job and began to build 3-D printers. Having never taken some classes in electrical engineering or robotics, he found everything he was supposed know on the Internet. He often starts with some parts finding from online stores. The rest is trial and error. He comes up with a design idea, test it and observes the result. If it doesn’t work, he analyzes why or starts over. That’s not so different from what a scientist does an experiment. I admire him for his applying original idea to real-world problems. I hope he will succeed.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Bob,
The problem you face was very common nowadays. I have working parents too. So I would like to give some advice from my own experience.
Firstly, you must try to understand what your parents work so hard. It is sure because they love you. They want to give you all the things you need for the good life. It is possible for them to stop working because die whole family depends on you. Secondly, you should believe in that your parents do care about how you feel and want you to be happy. However, you just need to find ways to spend time with them and tell them you miss them. Try not complain about things too much. Instead, try to find solution together with your parents.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my memory, my grandfather was kind and not good at expressing himself. I never knew that he really thought. He never judged book by its cover and treated people around him equal. When I was in primary school, I sent with him a letter, telling him how much I loved him. He never mentioned that he had received the letter and I never asked. When he passed away, I cleaned out my things. I found the letter hiding in his bedroom. On the back of the letter, he writes: “I’m so glad you love me, my grandson. I love you, either.” At that moment, I was so moved that I burst into tear.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Everyone will be full of respect when mentioned a mother’s love. Truly, who can love you more than your dear mother does in world? But in modern society, especial among one-child families, mothers usually give too much love to her only daughter or son. They try to help or even protecting their children in every way, which left their sons or daughters too comfortable to deal with challenges themselves.
What we all know, we have entered into the 21st century, and the young generation will face more challenges in the future. There is nothing wrong for mothers to love their children, and they should also leave rooms for their children to develop themselves and become independent.
