增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my memory, my grandfather was kind and not good at expressing himself. I never knew that he really thought. He never judged book by its cover and treated people around him equal. When I was in primary school, I sent with him a letter, telling him how much I loved him. He never mentioned that he had received the letter and I never asked. When he passed away, I cleaned out my things. I found the letter hiding in his bedroom. On the back of the letter, he writes: “I’m so glad you love me, my grandson. I love you, either.” At that moment, I was so moved that I burst into tear.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In our life there are many valuable experiences. As for me, cook for my mom on her 40th birthday is unforgettable experience. In order to surprise my mom that day, so I decided to cook a bowl of noodles with an egg. Waking up early, I begin to boil the noodles in the kitchen. It were the first time that I had fried an egg by my own. Unfortunately, the eggs always got burnt, though I tried several time. Just then my mom came in. Seeing that I had done, she was moved to tears. He tasted the food joyfully, saying it was the more wonderful birthday gift she had ever received.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A recent survey shows most students often communicate with their parents, and there are still some who think it embarrassed to share their ideas with them. Actually everyone should attach important to family communication. It strengthens the bond（关系） of the family and bridge the gap between children and parents. In addition to, sharing your personal problems and emotions will great help reduce the pressure on you and build up our confidence.
As for my family, we had a special dinner together every Saturday evening, over which everyone present takes turns to sharing one problem while the others try to suggest solutions. In this way whole family can enjoy every single bit of life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mom, my dad or my friends don’t know me as much as one person who I admire a lot. He’s my grandfather. My parents are both working busy and I have little chance see them during the week. They left the house at 7:30 every morning and get home around 8 pm. So it is my grandfather who keeps me company. He is the one which takes me for long walks and cycle rides. She plays football with me every Saturday. We share with stories and jokes and spend many happy moment together. If I do something wrong, it is he who saves me from get into trouble with my parents. My life is much rich because of my grandfather.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the saying goes, “Chance favored the prepared mind.” I learned this from one of my experience.
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.
From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are many ways to express love. Saying "I love you" on my father's or mother's birthday is the good way to let them to know how I love them.
If I often help my parents doing some simple housework, especially when they tired after work, my parents must feel my love for them. I also often gave my parents a hug. I know a warm hug will makes us feel connected to each other, which does good to our healthy.
Getting some small but meaningful gift must be an exciting moment for my loved ones. And I think what I will do so on some specially days.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three months ago, I was walking on campus when I hear two students saying that Mrs. Wu, our English teacher, would retire in next month. I shared the news with all my classmate and we decided to hold a farewell party to thank her for that she had done. After school we began to make fully preparations. I bought lot of flowers from a shop. Beside, Nancy prepared a short video recorded our happy time. When Mrs. Wu came into the classroom, I presented the flowers to him. With tears in the eyes, she was greatly happy but moved by what we did.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
On Sunday, Miss Green told Lisa, Jack and Lily a story about a girl names Cathy, who is just 12 years old. One day, when she was at the home, her mother careless cut her finger, which immediately started bleeding. As a little girl, Cathy didn’t get a panic. Instead, she calmly cleaned her mother wound and then stopped it from bleed. She did that so she had just learned how to give first aid. Then Miss Green encouraged both of them to learn more about first aid. “It’s really important because it can not only helps deal with injuries but also save life,” she said. After hearing it, they decide to learn first aid skills.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Several days ago, my father came to my school see me. He told me that when he was driving past a small shop, he spots an old woman lying on the roads. Around her stood some people, talk about the old woman’s condition. Besides, no one dared to raise the old woman. My father stopped his car, helped an old woman sit up, and woke her up. Then someone beside them dialed 120 but soon an ambulance was arrived. After hearing this, I felt that your father was a hero. I should learn about him.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在此符号下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This afternoon I went to the bookstore near my house, only find it was closed. Just then, I noticed a schoolboy walking in front of me. When he passed by a white wall, he left two footprints on it. An old man, who saw that had happened, shouted at him angry. The boy felt afraid or ran away quickly.
A few minutes later, another boys passed by the white wall and saw the footprints. He thought for a moment and took out of a pencil from his schoolbag. While I was wondered, I saw the boy painting the panda on the wall. And the footprints become the panda’s black eyes. What a smart boy I was!
