【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Thirty years ago, my world almost fell apart. I had operation and was fired. In a few weeks, I saw an ad about a Spanish festival. Although I was very upset, and I decided to go. Here, I met a gentleman with who I chatted for hours. A few day later, I came home to found a letter at my door. It was from that friend. Inside the letter was a 1,000-dollar check to help me through his hard days. Sixteen years later, I met a family that bad needed help. I gave them enough money to get through. They called me their angel, but I told them I once had an angel, also.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
          2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tom is no longer the boy he used to be. Only a year before, he was overweight and a little lazy. He got tiring easily and did not like sports. It was not until he got serious ill that he realized that he should make a change. He started to exercise and begin to eat a healthier diet of more vegetables or less meat. These changes helped her lose a lot of weight. He is now a very happy boy at very good shape, and that he is always so active.

We can learn from Tom that we should careful about what we eat and make sure that we take enough exercises.

【推荐3】短文改错,文中共有10处语言错误，

I tried a new lifestyle. I gave up the Internet, but even didn’t watch TV. I thought I would feel very boring. However, I had very different day. I wrote two article that morning. In the past, I always want to write one, but I didn’t have time. While I was separated from the net and TV, I could devote me to writing. I once read an article, that said that every morning the writer spent two hours wrote without the net. At that time, I thought up she was too strict. After I tried the method myself, I found it real worthwhile.

【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I have never been to a cooking school. I learned cooking from my mother because she was really interesting in teaching me how to cook. The main reason for this was because my mother didn’t know how to cook something when she got married.

My grandmother never allowed her stay in the kitchen. At the age of 25, my mother started cooking, it was very hard for her. Therefore, she had to take a few cooking class to prepare our meals. After having that experience, she has decided to teach me how to cook.

I remember I always help my mother when I was with her in the kitchen enjoy cooking. Nowadays, I am thank for that experience.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Since I was born, my mother has put all his heart on me. She accompanies me all the time and do everything to make me happy. I am proud that I have so a good mother. In my heart, she like a soldier. Therefore, yesterday when my mother was doing the dish, I came to help her. To my surprised, I found she had got a white hair. I never thought she would got old. I felt so sorry to let her to worry about me. At that time, I wanted to helping her to do many things and told her that I had grown up.

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am Li Hua, the Senior 1 student. Recently, I’ve been busy prepared for the coming exam. Unluckily, I find quite hard to devote myself on study. I meet some problems what trouble me a lot. So I’m writing to ask you for help.

I have to spend so very much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take part in sports. Beside, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents made me extremely stressful (有压力的) because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles them most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Could you please offer me some advices on how to solve these problems?