增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In our life there are many valuable experiences. As for me, cook for my mom on her 40th birthday is unforgettable experience. In order to surprise my mom that day, so I decided to cook a bowl of noodles with an egg. Waking up early, I begin to boil the noodles in the kitchen. It were the first time that I had fried an egg by my own. Unfortunately, the eggs always got burnt, though I tried several time. Just then my mom came in. Seeing that I had done, she was moved to tears. He tasted the food joyfully, saying it was the more wonderful birthday gift she had ever received.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sisters; in another words, I am the only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time on my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandpa has been in hospital for one and a half week. He has just received the operation and is very weak. Seeing his low spirits, so I often come to accompany him after school. Obviously, he is more than happier every time I come. The other patients in the same room are also extremely helpful. They talk merry with my grandpa and comfort him, say he will be well soon. The nurse, she is in charge of my grandfather, also encourages him. I am so grateful to what they have done. Gradually, my grandfather cheers up. Yesterday, he even asked me bring him a book as he want to read to kill time.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers or parents. As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly. My father is a teacher, whom loves his works and students very much.
He tried to improve himself every day. And be will also spare some time to accompanying me and share many funny things to me about his work. When I come across some problems in my studies, and my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome it bravely. He has the amount of good reputations in his work and respected by his students. Therefore, I think my father is my most respectable person.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m one of your customer, I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t received it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book were torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missed.
I’m sorry to have received such poorly service, and I believe I have every right ask you to deal with this problem. I hope you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Beside, I’d like to be informed of the process of your deal with my complaint.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On October 1st, a ceremony was held on Tian’anmen Square to celebrate 70th anniversary of the founding of the People’s Republic of China. Unfortunately, I, together with some schoolmates, were chosen to take part in the parade.
With flower in our hands, we did every move to the music carefully. When passed Tian’anmen Square, we were very excited. My eyes were filled to tears of joy and pride.
Although the three-month training was tough, but it was a great honor to take part in so a great event. I am so proud of my motherland which I surely will put more efforts into study and make her more power in the future!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sharing has a lot of benefits. Confidence is the most precious thing which sharing brings me. When I first started high school, I was very nervous that I failed the math test for the first time I took it. I felt depressing and helpless until one of my new classmate came up to me and asked if I was OK. After tell him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and become good friends. We shared my ideas, problems, and happiness. Sharing with friends helped me gradual bring back my confidence and adapt the new school life.
