增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandpa has been in hospital for one and a half week. He has just received the operation and is very weak. Seeing his low spirits, so I often come to accompany him after school. Obviously, he is more than happier every time I come. The other patients in the same room are also extremely helpful. They talk merry with my grandpa and comfort him, say he will be well soon. The nurse, she is in charge of my grandfather, also encourages him. I am so grateful to what they have done. Gradually, my grandfather cheers up. Yesterday, he even asked me bring him a book as he want to read to kill time.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I grew up in a family when no one was willing to show love. I knew I was loved, but it was hardly expressed, either in words and with a hug. Then, at the age of 14, I was met Judy. I quickly noticed how often she told her kid she loved them and how I hugged them. As with any habit, I picked it, and the more I did so, the easy it became for me. Now I never fail to hugging my friends or family members, and it has entire changed how I relate to them. It’s a awesome feeling!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My family had a rule when we were young. My mother would put a small basket and the large jar on the table with some paper. “Wherever you feel sad, wrote it down and put the note in the basket. Put your happily notes in the jar,” my mother told me. Each night after dinner, my mother would pull up out two notes from the basket and two from the jar read aloud. The basket contained notes saying things like “I’m lonely.” The paper in the jar made us smiling. Most evenings, the basket was empty. Therefore, the jar was always plenty. It reminded us to focus much on our blessings than our worries.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As my mother and father were always busy working, so I was often at home felt boring all the time and I felt sorry for myself. One day, in my way home from school, saw a person living in the park. He was wearing dirty but worn-out clothes. He gave me a big smile when he saw me. He looked if he was the happiest man in the world. Looked at him, realized how luckily I really was. I have enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had hard-working parents who really cared about him. I realized what grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago, I had an unpleasant holiday after graduate from high school. I planned to go to Phillip Island since I have visited the Australian mainland before. Much with my disappointment, the guide cut my holiday shortly by two days. He made another mistake by sending me to the same places I had visited them the year before. Besides, the holiday I went on includes none of the activities mentioned in the travel plan. To make matters bad, I had to share a double room with someone I did not know, despite the fact I had paid for a single room. Lastly, my luggages arrived a week late as the result of the delay caused by the travel agency.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改∶在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意∶
1. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by bus. It very crowded and I had to stand. Besides me, there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms. In the front of her, a young man occupied two seat, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy ask his mother curious, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought that perhaps the woman would blame the man. Beyond my expectation, the woman answers with a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must be very tiring because of hard work.” The young man must have heard our conversation. His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hunter likes to go traveling in summer, but he had bad lucky this time. Last week he went to an old temple on a high mountain alone. On the way there it suddenly began to rain heavily, so he ran down the mountain quick. When he got to the foot of the mountain, he found that the wooden bridge was under of the water. He had to spend the rain night in a broken house. He was so cold that he could hardly fall sleep.
The next morning the rain stopped and the bridge was damaged. He thought the river was not deep, so he tried to swim. In the center of the river, the water nearly washed he away. Luckily, he was saved by two man, but he lost his bag. Then they gave him some foods and dry clothes.
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