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题型:改错-短文改错 难度:0.65 引用次数:71 题号:16704096
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My grandpa has been in hospital for one and a half week. He has just received the operation and is very weak. Seeing his low spirits, so I often come to accompany him after school. Obviously, he is more than happier every time I come. The other patients in the same room are also extremely helpful. They talk merry with my grandpa and comfort him, say he will be well soon. The nurse, she is in charge of my grandfather, also encourages him. I am so grateful to what they have done. Gradually, my grandfather cheers up. Yesterday, he even asked me bring him a book as he want to read to kill time.

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