假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hunter likes to go traveling in summer, but he had bad lucky this time. Last week he went to an old temple on a high mountain alone. On the way there it suddenly began to rain heavily, so he ran down the mountain quick. When he got to the foot of the mountain, he found that the wooden bridge was under of the water. He had to spend the rain night in a broken house. He was so cold that he could hardly fall sleep.
The next morning the rain stopped and the bridge was damaged. He thought the river was not deep, so he tried to swim. In the center of the river, the water nearly washed he away. Luckily, he was saved by two man, but he lost his bag. Then they gave him some foods and dry clothes.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Thursday we go to Mianshan Mountain for our autumn outing.We got the foot of the mountain at 9 am. Following the long path,they began to climb.After some time,we were all tiring.We had a very shortly rest and moved on.At last,we succeeded in getting to the top,on which we kept laughing and jump.It was seemed that we were the happiest people in the world.We took some photo there,and then sat down but had something to eat.At 3 pm, we began to go down.It was a interesting and unforgettable day and all of us wished the autumn of our country would be with us forever.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend. I had been looking forward to go there for a long time. It is one of the modern city in the world. There are also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can’t learn it in school. I’d also like to seeing the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Unfortunately, the Twin Towers were destroyed on September 11th, 2001 and I would have the chance to see them by themselves. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I visited Mountain Dragon with several classmate today. We arrived at the foot of Mountain Dragon on half past nine and spend nearly one hour in climbing. We could see flowers and grass all the way up and the air in the mountain smelt very freshly. We did not feel tiring at all. When we got to the top, and we were all wet with sweat. We sat under a tall tree to have rest, drinking some water and eating anything. There were several temples in the mountain. Monks (僧侣) in a temple was singing. We watched for a longer time because we had never seen this before. It was really a beautiful mountain.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （＼） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
That I was in the second grade, my mother would frequently send me there to the little neighborhood store. One day I went there with a list, and when the storekeeper's back turned, I couldn't help reach into his candy box on the counter and pocketing one. On the way home, I enjoyed them very much. But over the years, I felt guilt about it so much. Therefore when I spotted the old storekeeper at the football game during my high school years, I apologized at him. He smiled, holding out his hand, and said, "You owe me ten cent."
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改只限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I have a photo that is of great important to me. In the photo, I was playing the ping-pong happily with my father. I used to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained him hard, even though he was tiring after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt such sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sit quietly with me. The next morning, I find a piece of paper that said, “Never give up, dear. I am pride of you.”
Now I spend less time on ping-pong because my busy studying schedule. But I will never forget which my father told me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half the money. I should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happily I was when I rode to school by my own bicycle.
