增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will be 18 years old. The person I want to expressing my deepest gratitude to him is my dad, a construction site worker. In order to support the whole family, he always works very hardly, and never feels discouraging. In a sense, my dad tells me indirectly to be optimistic person. In other words, he has taught me to enjoy how life has offered to me instead of complaining about it. On addition, no matter when I encounter unpleasant things, he always comfort me patiently. He often helps me find a few useful solution. Because of my dad, I have became a loving person that I am now.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
) 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy on my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Felt quite sorry for that, I decided to do anything. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thoroughly cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in the place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furnitures. After that, I swept and mop the floors. At this very moment, parents came back and were quite surprising to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I felt very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It goes without saying that all parents love their children. Without parents’ care, children couldn’t have grow up healthily. We owe many thanks for parents. To be frank, teaching a man how to fish is much better than give him a fish. Only by doing some housework regular can we form the habit of doing things by ourselves. But we want parents to give chances to practice. As the time goes on, our parents will grow old and we can’t rely on him for ever, we’ll step out of our families and go work independently sooner and later. Honestly speaking, spoiling a child do harm to him. We should talk with them openly and patiently. I believe our parents will finally understand and support us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last night after I had the supper, I went to do my homework. I finished all the work except the last one in half an hour, but I still couldn’t work itself out. An hour late, I wanted to giving up. But my father told me to keep on work. I made it the help of my father at last. I smiled, but so does my father. From the experience I know nothing in the world is impossible whether I make up my minds to do it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
I'm sorry to tell you that I had lost your new flash drive. Now I'm expressed my deepest apology for my carelessness. Actually, I put the flash drive in my schoolbags after we met in the library yesterday. But to my sorrow, it was lost on my way to home. I tried to get it back, but failed. How sorry but guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy same flash drive in some stores but it is too expensive to me. However, I promise what I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a complete new one by the end of this month. Please forgive me and accept your sincere apology.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer vacation, I have a chance to visit Cambridge University, that is located in a small town northeast of London, UK. The famous university known to Chinese people main due to Farewell to Cambridge Again.
It was a bright and a clear day on early July. I could see tourist admiring the view at ease in rented boats. I think sometimes, we all need so a beautiful view to get rid of anxiety and hope for a brighter future. Thus, when I saw the pleased sights, I knew there would always be something good waiting for myself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
These day, people break traffic rules and littered everywhere. It does serious harm with our life. I think people should make a effort to change this situation.
As for him, I will bear traffic rules in mind. If I ride a bike, I’ll never cross a road until the traffic light turn green. If I walk, I will forget to use the zebra crossing. Meanwhile, I will make it as my duty to help keep our environment clean or healthy. I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever possibly. I hope my behavior will make a difference.
