增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation (犹豫), I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
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Last Sunday I finished my volunteer work in the wildlife park in my hometown, where was a valuable experience for me.
In park, I did the cleaning for the animals and feed them every day. In addition to, I corrected the translation mistakes on the leaflets which give visitors basic informations about the park. I also worked as a guide tell visitors that they should pay attention to when visiting the park.
I am so happy that I did something useful but meaningful for those wonderfully creatures. I hope more and more people will join me to protect it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At a store yesterday, a mom in the front of me left her wallet in her car. As she’d just chosen a cupcake, I decided to paying for her. However, she was already holding her baby but walking out the door. While the cashier was ringing my purchases up, I regret not helping that mom. Suddenly, I realized I could still do it. I asked the cashier to ring up her cupcake with that I had chosen, and by the time the mom got back, the cupcake was waiting her. She burst into tear immediately and I got the best hug. To my great surprise, the young cashier which had seen all this told me in a softly voice that she would pay for another person in need. Hearing that, I smiled with proud.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday was my parents’ twenty-fifth wedding anniversaries. They wanted to do something specially to mark it. After dinner, my parents drive to a food bank, where is about five kilometers away from our home. Free food offered there to everyone who is in need.
My parents were very delighted to serve to others. They thought it was a excellent experience to spending the evening in that way. They said that the staff working there were very friendly, but the people they helped were also very polite.
They all decided to go there more often if time permitted. They felt it good to provide others with food service.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
While in New Zealand as an exchange student, I stay with a host family. My host parents organized many activities for me at my spare time to relieve my homesickness. However, life in New Zealand isn’t easily to me. My main problem was the language, I was failed to understand much and that lasted for several week. Fortunately, I soon made several friends, whom help made me adapt gradually. They talked about life both in China and in New Zealand, learn more about each other’s culture. Now back home, I still remember the life here. For me, it is unique and valuable experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was about 6 o'clock in the afternoon while I was walking along the road, heading home from school. The wind blew very hard that, all of a sudden, an advertising board by the roadside blown down to the ground. Before realizing that had happened, I was knocked down by the board. I feel great pain in my legs and could not move. At that moment, a man who ran up to help me. Seen I was badly hurt, he drove me to the hospital immediately. Before calling my parents, the man left without leaving my name and address. What I remember is that he is a middle-aged man. I want to find the man and express my thank.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father's friend Henry used to be a teacher at a medical school and he was very strict with his student. The students were afraid of him, though he was seldom pleased of the answers they gave. Once a student was seated before him, and Henry required him describe a certain illness, his description of which turned out to be OK. Then Henry asked about the cure for the illness, but the student gave the right answer. "How much will you give the patient?" "A full spoon!" Suddenly the student realizes that there was anything wrong. He said anxiously, "I've made the mistake: a full spoon is too many, and be can take only five drops." "It's too late; your patient has been died," Henry said cold.
