增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many a student don’t have enough time to do sports, thus causing their physical and mental health to suffer a lot of. Therefore, our school is conduct Happiness Fitness activities to improve our health.
As scheduling, the activities are held from 5:00 to 6:00 every afternoon. We are free do whatever we like, such as running and playing table tennis. The playground is full of laughters and life, and there are expressions of satisfy and joy on our faces.
These activities are very meaningfully because they really make them happy and fit. Besides, we have the much better understanding of sports,friendship as well as team spirit.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A few years ago I attended in a sports meeting in a special school. Nine runners, all either physically and mentally disabled, got ready at the starting line for the 100-yard dash. On hear the gun, they all start, not very fast, but at least with excitement. Then all of sudden, one boy fell on the ground and began to cry. The others eight runners heard the boy. They slowed down, turned around and went back to her. One girl bent down and helped him up gentle. All nine linked arms and walked across the finishing line together. Everyone in the stadium stood on their foot cheering, that went on for several minutes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my first day of school when I am introduced to the concept of labor education. At the first, I didn’t understand what it was necessary for us to learn how to plant trees and fix things around the school. However, as I participated in these activities, I gradual appreciated the value of learning practical skills. Not only did it teach me the importance of team works and responsibility, but it also allowed me gain a sense of satisfaction. I am grateful with the opportunities that school labor education provided to me, but the lessons I learned will always stay with me. Overall, I believe that experience labor activities is beneficial for myself.
Last week, a chorus competition was holding in our school. Our teacher told us about it on Monday and encouraged us take part in it. After the heated discussion, we both agreed to sing Defending Yellow River. Four days later, the chorus had started in the school hall. We sang with full passion, wearing uniform costume. We were glad to see that all audience applauded warm at the end of our performance. Thanks for our wonderful and inspired performance, we finally won the first prize. We were not only proud of our victory, and deeply impressed by the meaning of cooperation.
My school ends at 2: 30 pm. Then we can join in a wide range of activity. In my school, there are many clubs for students to take part in. I used to lie on the couch comfortable eating chips and watching TV until I joined the running club. Now, I would rather running hard for an hour every day. It is running which helps me lose weight, which provide great health benefits. Now I’m much more healthier than before. I am advised to keep going and I will be a couch potato again! Besides, either good grades and involvement in afterschool clubs highly valued when we apply for college. Joining clubs is on great significance.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is known to all what sport is of great importance to us. Most people opinions about their favorite sport vary. Personal, I like swimming most and the following is my reasons. First, it’s the affordable sport. Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, but it isn’t pricey. Second, swimming is very benefit to your heart and lungs. In addition its physical benefits, swimming is also a way to relax. I always desire to staying in the pool in summer. In conclusion, swimming can give your peace of mind to continue with your day.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I used to feel sleepy in class and I couldn’t focus to my lessons. As a result, not only did I do badly in our studies, but also my health went from bad to worse, for that I was often scolded by my parents. I decide to change my situation. Half a year ago, followed my teacher’s advice, I began to join some sports activities. I now play the basketball for 45 minutes every day. My health has improved, but at the same time, I’ve made lots of progresses in my studies. Physical exercise has changed me into an entire new person.