增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Allen,
I am so delight to know that you want to buy some gifts with Chinese characteristics. I think a Chinese brush will be a good choice.
The Chinese brush is traditional writing and drawing tool, dated back to more than 2,000 years ago. It was one of China’s Four Treasures of the Study, that is made of hairs of animals and bamboo. Writing with a Chinese brush is a little bit of hard, and it is beneficial to shape one’s mind.
In my opinions, the Chinese brush is a perfect gift for my relatives. Hope my recommendation will be helpfully. Wish you a nice journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
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When I was in high school, most of my friends had bicycle. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money, and he said he could only give me half of the money. I should earn the other half by myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month late. He gave me the other fifty. You can imagine how happily I felt when I ride to school on my own bicycle.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限于一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Have you heard from Singles’ Day in China? Many people stay up lately that night, shop online to get big savings. Well, the US has something like it calling Black Friday.
Black Friday is one of the bigger shopping days in the US. It always falls on the day after the Thanksgiving holiday. On this day, store will offer special deals, just like on Singles’ Day in China. On Black Friday, shoppers will often wake up very early to wait in line at stores after they open. They might start wait in line as early as 2 or 3 am. Sometimes, the crowds will be such big that it is impossible to get inside the store. People sometimes fight over things because there are only a few are left.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last weekend, my British friend, Jim, spotted paper-cutting stand when we were wandering on the street. Had never seen pape—cuts, he immediately bought one. Therefore, the seller shook her head at the moment she saw the 100-yuan . note Jim handed over to her. She had no. changes! How disappointed Jim was! He was about to quit while I took out my cellphone, scan the QR code on the stand and paid five yuan. Jim was very surprising. I explained to her that nowadays we could pay with a cellphone for almost everything. "Wow! "Jim said, "The paper-cut looks great, and the payment method seems even great!”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m longing to join in this activity for an exchange student to Britain, because I think it’s a good opportunity for me to improve my English or I can learn more about British history and its culture.
I have many hobby. I like surfing the Internet and do sports. In addition to, I’m good at drawing and I love listening to music. If I’m luckily enough to have the chance, I hoped I live in a friendly host family and that they are willing to take me to visit around often. I’m sure I can get well with them. I would appreciate it whether you could help me achieve our dream.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ve learned from the newspaper that my company is looking for a clerk. I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply for at the position.
First of all, allow me introduce myself .I have just graduated from senior high school and take the College Entrance Examination. I want to find an part-time job in the summer. I’m 18 years old and have a good knowledge of English. In fact, I won the first prize in the English competition hold in our school last year. Beside, I’m quite easy-going and therefore very popular among my classmate.
I sincere hope you can give me a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧weekend with you. Luckily the I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. in am on Friday evening. |
Dear Visitors,
Welcome to Hangzhou. Hangzhou is a beautiful city famous for her West Lake. As the number of visitors increasing year by year, we are sorry to see empty bottles and plastic bags floated on the lake, and even flowers picked up and trees destroyed, which does harm to the image of the city. I must appeal to everyone to behave properly. Here and now I strongly suggest:
First, strengthen the environment-protecting awareness of the people who throws rubbish here and there habitual. Second, it’ high time that the government takes further measures to protect the beauty of West Lake such as placing good-looking dustbins at visitors’ convenience. Third, be a volunteers to beautify the lake now and then, but I believe with the joint efforts of everyone there will exist forever the saying “up above is paradise and down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou”.