My neighbor Granny Zhang and my mother are good friend. They often walk, dance and shop together. Last week Granny Zhang gave us several pies making by herself. And she brought big apples, which given by her relatives. We were very grateful for her generosity. How could we thanked her? Then an opportunity came. Yesterday was the Children’s Day. I made lots of dumplings with my mother, and then I sent any to Granny Zhang’s house. She was very happily to see me. She happily accepted the food but gave me a box of chocolate for return. Later she told me that she celebrated the day by cook the dumplings for her grandchildren.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Alice, my best friend, devotes many energy to her lessons. She is always one of the top student in our class. She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons. As a volunteer, she has successful organized some voluntary activities. We paid a visit a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. That we did was warmly welcomed. Win honour for our school, Alice is admired by our classmates.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party in five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng in my place . We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends . Three years ago ,Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week . Li Meng came see me every day . Then her father changed jobs and they moved to another city . Since then we haven’t seen each other much, but we’ve kept write to each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：(1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hi, Janice,
It’s been a month since I come to this new school and I really want to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
It’s a story that happened five years ago. Li Hua, which lived in the city, came to visit her uncle in our village. She and I became good friend. One day, I went to her uncle’s to do homework with her. But she wasn’t in. I found beautiful clock on her bed. It was the first time that I have seen a clock. I became very curiously and took it to have a look. Since I had never seen a clock before, I touched it here and there.But suddenly, I found the clock wasn’t working. I felt upset and found it difficult to calm it down. Late that day, I told Li Hua I had broken her clock. She smiled, saying his little cousin had dropped it onto the ground this morning and it had stopped working since then. She persuaded me into forget it.
Everybody needs have friends in life. But being a friend can sometime be hard work. Learn how to solve problems in friendship can make you a better friend and a happier person. An universal problem between friends is that they don’t know why to talk with each other about difficult things. When they are talking, they often get madly with each other. What can they do? It took time to learn how to communicate well, and it is important to understand why a friend gets angry to you when you say something. If you know which makes your friend angry, and you can try to talk about the problem in a different way.
I finished my junior middle school in a boarding school. At the first, I felt very lonely because I hardly know anybody. I couldn't get on well with my classmates and just looked forward to go back home to meet my parents. I even couldn't concentrate my subjects. As time went by, besides, I gradually got used to the school life. I made many new friend and often took part in activities, in that I improved my communicating skills. As I had a lot of interesting things to do, I final enjoyed my school life. Now,whenever I think of my first boarding school experience, I think of them as being instructive and unforgettably.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字的符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
More and more people attach great importance relationships in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationships among friends. Polite word can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.
Always saying “please” and “thank you” will make your friends feeling more comfortable and more willingly to offer help when necessary. We all know that one man’s success is based on what he deals with people. Always being grateful to others people’s kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say. The more support you win from other people, the more faster you will move towards your goal.
Remember, being polite cost nothing so it’s worth a million dollars.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I am delighted when received your letter asking what customs you should pay attention to when visiting a friend. Here are my tip for you.
First of all, bear it in mind that you should arrive punctually or some time early than the appointed time, which is of great significance show your politeness. Additionally, to be respectful, you had better bring an appropriate gift, as some fruits. Most important, you should mind your table manners, where are significant. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to our own custom.
In brief, did as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have a great fun at your friend’s home.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，(从第11处起)不计分。
More and more people attach great importance relationships in career success. Being polite is the first but most important step to develop good relationships among friends. Polite word can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.
Always saying “please” and “thank you” will make your friends feeling more comfortable and more willingly to offer help when necessary. We all know that one man’s success is based on what he deals with people. Always being grateful to others people’s kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say. The more support you win from other people, the more faster you will move towards your goal.
Remember, being polite cost nothing but it’s worth a million dollars.
