增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to visit my beloved grandmother, that is already in her seventy. She took care of myself when I was in primary school. Delighted to see me, she held my hands and hurry to bring me something delicious. Heard that I would be a senior three student soon, she told me not be nervous and that everything would be OK. Then she also stressed that study and healthy were equally important. Feeling so warmly, I promised her that I would make full preparations for the coming entrance examination both physical and mentally. I firmly believe that I will get satisfying results the next year.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I grow up, I’ll work with animals. Though I don’t know exactly how I can do for the animals yet, I can at least to follow my brother. He is a excellent vet (兽医). He looks after frightened snakes. He says that snakes are easy to deal as they don’t have any legs. My father, a scientist, works to save rarely birds, some of that are really clever and can even say some words. My mother train dolphins every workday. They practise in the pool. She hears the dolphins talk and sing. That sounds really cool! There are so many animal job to choose from, but which one is right for them? I’ll have to wait and see!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：用斜线划去该词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city as well as. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My parents have done a lot for me, or I think it is time that I should do anything special to express my thanks.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, I was searching for a writing compete to enter as part of a creative-writing homework. While look through the websites, I noted an organization that publishes a magazine writes by and for teens. I’d never been browsing its website before I come across the Beijing Writing Programme. I filled out of an application and a few days later, I got a phone call from the publish of the magazine. He asked me some questions about my application and made comments the great opportunities. In the end, he told me what I was accepted. My parents felt happily and satisfied when I ran downstairs with the good news. They said I was always his pride.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr.Brown，
We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation.To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school，we have decided have a party for you.The party which will start at 6:30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall.It will possible last an hour.To start with，our monitor will give a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singing some English songs.In the end of the party，we will present you with some gifts and cards，mostly making by ourselves.I believe you will have a good time together.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely，
Frank
增加：在漏字符号（Ʌ）下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在划横线的词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及 其修改均仅限一词；
2.不得改变原文意思。
Dear myself,
Today, you might be 29 years old. You probably already Ʌ achieved my dream. You chose to work in your hometown as the doctor.
When you were young, you see some of your relatives die young because of lacking good medical resources. The idea of become a good doctor or helping more people in poor areas rooted (根植于) in your heart at that time.
I know it’s hardly being a medical major student. While seeing the smile face of your patients, you definitely will be satisfying. Try your best to save the more people! I am working hard for our dream right now and looking forward Ʌ meeting you in the future.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Jones,
I’ m going back home in next week, so I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
During my stay here as a exchange student, your wonderful teaching impressed me deep. Not only you prepare your lessons carefully in advance, you also behaved like a director in class, encouraged us to discuss in groups and share our ideas. Which moves me most is that you always talked to me patiently when I turned to you for help. With your encouragement, I became more confident, joined in class activities much actively, but gained a lot of knowledge in the end.
I sincerely invite you to visit China one day. I’ m sure you’ll have an unforgettable experience and fell in love with them.
