增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I live in a small town and in general, there is not many traffic on the roads. So I rare get stuck in traffic jams. Besides, I met heavy traffic last month when I went to Ludhiana to buy some clothes for my cousin wedding. When we start, there was no traffic. On the way back, the man road was shut down because of there had been a crash between two buses. Bigger cranes (起重机) had to been called to remove the buses from the roads and that took time. We stuck in the jam for at least 2 to 3 hours. So they tried to kill the time by playing games and listening to music.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’d like to share with you what has happened to the transportation in our city.
Firstly, great changes have been taken place to the transportation inside the city, which makes it convenient for citizens to get around. Some narrowly streets have been broadened, but there are less traffic jams. Secondly, transportation to other cities had also improved. Several highways are now on construction. Two high-speed railways connected our city to the national high-speed railway web is close to completion. At that time, the travel time to Beijing will be reduced to three hour. What deserves to be mentioned is that a airport has been in use for several years, making your city more and more popular.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With our city's first subway comes into use, great changes have been taken place recently. Many people preferred to take the subway instead of driving cars, because it's fastly and eco-friendly. Under the help of the subway network, traffic jams and road accidents have declined sharply, making that convenient for people to travel. In the meantime, we can enjoy clean airs and see a blue sky. Living in the present city, I can feel the strong sense of happiness. Beside, what makes us excited is it has connected the city with the towns nearby. I wish our city would be better and better.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
1. 只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
Nowadays many people cross streets without watch traffic lights. So traffic accidents often happen for those who didn’t follow traffic rules. Why don’t people follow traffic rules? They haven’t realized an importance of traffic safety. Besides, some people are such busy that they don’t want wait for the green light. How do we solve the problem? First of all, we should develop into the habit of following traffic rules. Secondly, who breaks traffic rules should be punished. Lastly, we should teach kids how to cross streets safe. If we do that, there will be fewer traffic accident and we will live a better life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Silina used to dreaming of being a singer and she has relied her confidence to practice singing for 10 years. Although she was turned up by many bands because she was overweight, she never gave up and stuck to sing. At the same time, she has lost weight successful by keeping a balanced diet and exercising regularly, in which has earned her success. Now his voice is familiar to everyone. She attaches great importance on not giving up and working hard! When talked about her past, she said: “Success is not always the easy thing and if we want to succeed, we must devote ourselves to it.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last night, I have a strange but interesting dream. On the way back home, I came across child from another planet who clothes seemed to be shining and looked beautiful. As I got close to him, he looked frightening and turned his back to me. Though I couldn’t speak his language, I used hand gestures to talk about him. A while later, he told me lots of amazing thing on his planet, which made me laugh. Suddenly, he began to cry, and then he explained he had lost his way but couldn’t find his home. Seen that, I offered to help him. Since his home had a telephone number like our, I asked him to call his parents using my phone. Soon after making the call he was disappeared.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Last year, I took part in the first table tennis competition which was held for all senior 2 students. I had never played on a standard table tennis court ago, or against such good players. In the first match I was against Wang Peng, who used a special bat to hit the balls really hard. It comes over the net such fast that I hardly saw it. I never stopped running or jumping, and soon I was out of my breath and had very little energy leaving. I was sure Wang Peng would easily beat me, and then, suddenly, he stopped. He got injury to his right ankle, and he needed treatment from the school nurse. I won! How a surprise!
