假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分
I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something about Project Hope. It has set up to help the children in the countryside which can’t afford to go to school. After school I went home. I was wondering if I could do something for the Project then I caught a sight of my money-collecting box on the table. Then I made up my minds to send my pocket money which I had saved for nearly one year for the children who want to go to school. I wrote a letter to him and hurried to the post office. Together with a letter I posted the money and send my best wishes to them.
相似题推荐
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Arnold was painting his car while he heard what sounded like an explosion. He called 911 and then head toward the scene. A deadly collision was occurred between a truck and a school bus. One of the student, Miles, who managed to escape of the burning bus, was bleeding from a cut on his head. Arnold wrapped a towel tight around his head and then called his father, Gaylord Hill. The father asked to talk with his son, but the teen had trouble heard with the bandage around her head. Then Miles was airlifted to the Medical Center, which his father went to meet him. Gaylord Hill said when he had chance, he planned to call Arnold back and thank him.
Last week as I pulled out of the parking lot with my son to watch the football game, I saw a woman trying to change her flat tire. Because of nobody stopped to help her,I went over and offered change her tire. She tried to be nice, said that she was thankful. After a while, I helped her out though I become dirty. When I got into the car, my son angry said to me, “Do you know that you did is likely to let us missing the game? Why did you help him?” I told him that it was the right things to do and we needed to help each other.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lucy,
My classmates and I intend to go to the nursing home to spend a Double Ninth Festival with the old people there. I am writing to invite you go with us.
According to our schedule, we will leave from our school at 8 o'clock in the morning and returned at around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. On arrive there, we will give them an excellent performance, what I believe will bring a lot of happiness to them. After that, we will do some other meaningfully activities, including doing a thorough cleaning and making dumpling. Accompanied by us, the old people will surely enjoy ourselves and feel very happy. However, I really hope you can join in us if it is convenient to you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but he rode it every day. One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What’s more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day, he posted the message on a poster board and put it in the front yard. “To the person who stole my bike, you hurt my feeling. But I am a Christian and I forgive him!” When he left home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike is back with new brakes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多改(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, I was late for an appointment scheduling for 6 p.m. To make matters worse, my phone ran out of power. It was raining heavy and I couldn’t figure out what to do. I notice what appeared to be a mother and her daughter talking over here. I walked over and interrupted, “Excuse me, may I use your phone?” She handed them to me, explaining it was close to be out of service. That was why she didn’t have money to pay the bill.
After hanging up, I pulled out bill of $20. I pressed it into the mother hand. Her daughter thanked for me and I felt pleased and left.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today when I went for a walk, I found some people quarreling beside a car. Out of curious, I got close to see what had happened. A dog was finding lying beside the car and dead. It was the car which hit it to death! The dog owner was so anger that he shouted at the driver. He was asked the driver to pay for it. But the driver didn’t agree. The quarrel didn’t end until a policeman came.
After looking the video, the policeman said to a dog owner, “You didn’t tie your dog. It ran here and there. So it was not the driver’s fault but your. He needn’t pay anything.” Feel embarrassed, the dog owner left unhappy at the end.