增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的河下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At the camp, we always get up early to make our beds before our teacher comes inspect. After breakfast, we have some freely time. Yesterday I headed for a stream to fish after breakfast but the only thing which I caught was a tree branch. In the afternoon, there is a variety of activities, such as singing and jogging, In the evening, we are asking to take on different kinds of task to get dinner ready. Yesterday evening, I was in the charge of preparing some hot dogs, but I accidentally dropped them on the fire and they got burnt. The other kids laughed at us about it. At night, we usually sit around a campfire, either chatting and just keeping silent.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year,I went shopping in a department store.Little do I know that I was heading for a very new experience. While I was walking around the store,I happened to see the foreigner trying to explain herself with a salesman. Gathering her courage,I decided to step in and helped her explain herself.Fortunately,I could understand that she was talking about,so I just translated it into Chinese.
I felt glad for able to help her and talk with her.She said that she was a student like me and was touring China lonely.She told me about some experience she had touring the country.Although I won’t see her again,but it’s good to meet someone like her from another country.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。（满分10分）
I’m a fan of reality TV shows and I watch it a lot. My favourite is “The Teenage Boss”, in whom twelve teenagers compete to winning a prize of £20, 000. In each episode, they’re divided two teams and face a challenged task. For example, once they have three days to come up with an original concept for a video game, make an advertisement and present it to a group of expert! The winning team is reward with a cool experience. However, the leader of the losing team must decide that who is most at fault for failing to win. Finally, the judges “fire” one person. The show is really good and I strong recommend it to anyone of my age.
