【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Research shows the kids who were allowed to keep their cell phones in their rooms will answer a text late at night. So it’s nature to worry when your child is ready for his first cell phone. It makes some self-discipline to manage the responsibility of a mobile phone but most kids are not ready for.

Typical, parents also find themselves with unclear sense of fear. Yes, this device is useful in providing your child with a convenient means of connections when you are apart. And it’s also a symbol of separation, a reminder what your child is spending more time at a distance from you. Even bad, having cell phones mean there might be some dangers in the outside world, which threaten your child at any time without you there to stop them.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

Last night I got caught in the heavy rain in the way home. As the result, I got a bad cold with a headache. I felt very tiring. My mother took me see the doctor. After the examination, the doctor told me to take it easy. He said it was nothing seriously. He also told me to have a good rest for a couple of days, take the medicines on time and drunk more boiled water. So I have to ask you fora three-day leave. After I recover, I would try to make up for the missing lessons. If there are anything I do not understand it, could I turn to you for help?

Yours,

Li Hua

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I'm Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.

I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On the New Year’s Day, I was very excited that I got up very early in morning. But Mother was even

early than me, and she has got the breakfast ready. After having breakfast, I together with my parents, left for home to visit my grandparents. On the way, I said Happy New Year to everyone which I met and they all said that back to me. Everyone was happy but friendly. In my grandparents’ home, they prepared many sweets and snacks for visitor, which were all very delicious. The most excited thing was that I got lucky money from his grandparents.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I had a good time during the Mid-Autumn Festival that I invited my foreign language teacher Mr Smith to spend the holiday together. I treated him as various moon cakes, which means reunion or get together. After the meal, we went out to admire the full moon. He was so much excited about our traditional culture that he asked me to tell him many about Chinese culture. I was high encouraged.

Then I told him about the story of Chang’e. It said that she ate a wonder drug by chance and fly to the moon. She had no other choices but to stay there, accompanying only by a white rabbit. He was deeply attracted by a story.

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was Mother’s day. I had the good idea after Mom had gone to do some shopping. I told Dad that I would do something specially to celebrate it. I asked Dad for advices. First we did some housework, that was always done by Mom. I mopped the floor carefully but Dad did some washing. Then we did what we could make some delicious dishes. I picked some flowers from the garden and put it in a vase. After that we went back to our own rooms, silently wait for Mom. When Mom returned to home and saw what had happened, she feels surprised and very happy.