增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。:
Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened, which causes serious damage. It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life.
In this case, we should take effective measure which can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety, because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless. Secondly, you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying.
As far as I am concerned, improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, when I was on our way to school, I was asking myself whether it would be better to stop persuade myself that I could do well in my weak subjects? Wouldn’t it be easy to give up math and physics? Just as I was thinking about this, I come across my teacher, with who I often discussed my problems. He gave me some suggestions and taught me several method of addressing my problems. In end, he said, “Keep it up!” From his words, I sudden realized that if I don’t give up, it will always be someone to help me. Because of my teachers and my family is always supporting me, I have no reason to give up.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is said that some students often cheat in the examinations at school. This phenomenon means one person copy or stealing another’s work. As a result, it is commonly to take examinations at school, but sometimes some students do lazy and don’t work hard at lessons, so they feel the questions too difficult to work out. So when taken examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get a better results to please their parents and teachers. In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it broke the school rules. We students should be honesty and try to get good results by studying hard instead cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get prepare for examinations.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month the Students' Union of our school organize an English Speech Competition.At first I didn't show some interest and wasn't very much confident.Then my English teacher Mr.Smith encouraged me.Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it.Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn.Glancing at my teacher's smiling face, I built up my confidence.Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner.
But my teacher's encouragement, I couldn't have won the first prize.I'm proud of Mr.Smith or the wonderful experience.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the popularity of cellphones and Internet, some of we students spend too much time playing with cellphones, which is bad for our studies. Worse is still, we have little time to communicating with our parents and friends. So do we have time for physical exercises.
How shall we do to improve the situation? All of us should realize the negative effects of modern media. Let’s limit our time by playing with cellphones. Instead we should spend more time playing sports or talking straightly with our parents and friends, which helped us relax and communicate.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Because of the fact as is known to us all, many people are no longer going out see films. Instead, they are seeing wonderfully films at home. Quite a few studio have even put on their new films online. Cinemas are fun. But do we still need it? In my view, there’re many differences between going to the cinema and seeing a film at home. When people will go to the cinema, they can enjoy the film with being disturbed by anything that they have to do at home. If cinemas stay opening, they can employ more people. Then workers can earn money and struggled along. That will help the economy recovers.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have recently been told that listen to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I’m sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she had turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gives a party she doesn’t have to invite a rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered certain electronic sounds have strangely effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze (瘫) with their legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder that the same thing will happen to neighbor someday.