增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
March 5th is a day in honor of Lei Feng, who people are called on to help others. On the morning of that day this year, our class met the school gate and went to a Hope Primary School by the bus. Upon arriving there, they gave us a warmly welcome. We gave the students some books, food or clothes. And then, we played several game with them and told them stories. Before we leave, we took a photo with them. See their smiling faces, we both felt a sense of happiness. We arrived home and promised to go back whenever possible. How an unforgettable experience it was!
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Volunteering has meaningful effect on your community. But it can also have many benefit for you.
To begin with, volunteering enable you to gain some valuable experience, that lays a solid foundation for your future life. In the meantime, by volunteering, you can make many friends, from whom you can obtain use knowledge that can’t be learnt it at school. On addition, volunteering provides you with a good opportunity to give back to society, thus a harmonious society can be create.
As far as I’m concerned, volunteering is a very good way to build self-confidence, too. When offered others help, we will have a sense of satisfaction and will be in good mood. However, volunteering is of great benefit not only to others but also to ourselves.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Being a volunteer can bring much benefits to us. We can learn new skills, gain valuable experiences, meet new people and so on. In the late August last year, I took part the voluntary work for a international sports meeting. Every day I worked in the supply office in the Athlete Villages for about seven hours. My job is to deliver daily supplies to the officials and athletes. When the sports meeting closed, I finished my job successful. Though the job was hard, but it was very meaningful. I made some friends with the people live there and some athletes from all around the world. This voluntary work also enriched your working experience, from that I learned some skills as well.
The International Volunteer Day approaching,some volunteers of our school were organized to assist the policemen with traffic control in our city. At 8 o'clock on the morning of last Sunday, we gather at the school gate. One of our teachers was in the charge of this activity and he divided us into four groups. Then we went to different crossings near our school. The police officers told us that we should do and how to protect themselves from danger. We spent the whole morning keep the streams of traffic flowing smooth. With a red banner in our hands, we stopped some road user running a red light. Some citizens praised us our good deeds. Because we were very tired that morning,we were pride to have offered service to our society.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we had held a grown-up ceremony for our come 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an promise that as grown-up we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we expressed our thanks to our parents which had gone through hardships to bring us up and our teachers who had been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave them cards expressing their good wishes. Finally we put on wonderfully performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it is of great important for us. I will never forget that day in my life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last October,we have had a series of reading activities.In the first two weeks,we read some great books.Among these books,I like The Old Man and the Sea better,from which I've learned never to give up when facing with difficulties.In the afternoon of October 18,we held a poetry contest.I recited a poem written by me and won first prize.At the end of the month,we acted out some famous work.My classmates and I performed The Million Pound Bank Note.But to our great delight,our performance was huge success.We both enjoyed such reading activities,wish to read more great books in the future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, the members of our school’s English club took up the exchange students in our school visit the City Cultural Center. During the visit, they appreciate a large picture exhibition of our rich local culture and several unique form of our local arts. Beside, they watched a video about the achievements we had made. They were all amazing at our colorful culture, saying the visit was real a cultural feast to them. The visit was indeed the great success, from whom they benefited a lot. They said it had not only enriched our life, but had helped them learn more about Chinese culture.