增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father is a policeman. On a cold winter evening, he saw old beggar sitting in a square outside a shopping center. His shoes had been worn out and his toes stick out. See his frozen feet, my father felt sad. He left and returned back with a pair of new shoes and socks, that he bought at a nearby store. He knelt down on the ground but helped the old homeless man put it on. His random act of kindness melted the hearts of the passer-by. A woman brought an old blanket from her house to protect the beggar with the freezing cold. The beggar was touched and said it was nice to know that angels true walk on earth.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in Grade 3, our school organized the interesting trip to a zoo in our city. I was very excited about the trip. Though I couldn’t sleep until late at night, I got to school at 7:00 am, half an hour after the reporting time. When I got on the school bus, there were only a teacher and three students in it. When all the people arrived, the students were divided into several teams leading by our teachers. After traveling on the road for about forty minutes, they arrived at the zoo. The bird watching area wherever there were different kinds of birds was our first stop. Then we also saw many other animals, such as deer, wolf and bears. Finally, it was time for us leave for home. The experience seems to be of little important today, but when I look back, I realize that how much it meant to me when I was young.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was driving to a meeting when I suddenly found there was a truck in the front of me. This truck stopped in the middle in the street and allowed an elderly lady cross the street. I was used to trucks driving straight ahead and not stopped for anyone. I called the company in that the driver worked and told them that he was a great driver because he lets the elderly lady cross the street. I wanted this driver to be recognizing for his good manner and driving. The customer service lady was thank that I called and let him know about the driver.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线( ____ )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It delighted me that my school will start a winter camp, which includes a variety of course, such as cooking, swimming, and giving first aid. To be honesty, I am interested in the course of giving first aid and I plan to sign up for it.
I choose to attend to the course due to the fact that first aid is greatly important to people. If a person gets injured but needs medical care before a doctor can found, every second counts in saving life, in that case the knowledge of first aid can help save lives. Beside, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopeful, the course will help me to learn about what to deal with medical emergencies.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am writing to ask you to help to look for the Chinese student.
Yesterday, my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fall down and could hardly move. Just at that moment, when a Chinese girl came to him. She gave him first aid (急救) but called an ambulance. Because the kind girl, Tony was sent to hospital in time. But the girl left quietly after Tony could express his thanks. The girl is about eighteenth years old and middle-sized. Tony real wants to meet her to express her sincere appreciation. Could you please help to find her?
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
What qualities do you think heroes should have? To me, heroes are brave and helpful. They’re people you respect of. My heroes are the volunteers who go to the earthquake-hit areas last week. The disaster caused great damages to the areas. Therefore, the volunteers’ efforts relieved the victims’ suffering. They helped the victims by giving themselves food, water and shelter. There were also many doctors and nurses who volunteered help the wounded. The rescue work turned out dangerously, but no one gave up rescue the unfortunate people. I think nothing is equal to which the brave people did in an earthquake.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Sunday. I was doing housework while someone knocked at the door. It was milkman who sent a bottle of milk. But I didn’t order it. Feel confused, I noticed a note stuck to it. The note said “Dear neighbor, I’m sorry about the noise making by our decoration that will last for three day. The bottle of milk is given to you as a gift to show off our apology.” The next day, everyone in the neighborhood were talking about the milk and our coming neighbor. With the decoration finished, the family final moved into the neighborhood. People come to help. I was extremely touched by this scene which was full of consideration and appreciate.
