I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to go there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful city all over the world. There are many places of interest which I can learn something I can’t learn it in school. I’d also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunate, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11, 2001, or I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be unforgettable experience.
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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This summer vacation when I along with my friends travelled to Dunhuang to explore the Silk Road. We arrived at Dunhuang on a sun day. Getting off the train in high spirit, we couldn’t wait visit the Mogao. Caves. We were deeply impressed by its scenery, the guide vivid introduction or wonderful artworks of ancient craftsmen. The next day, we devoted us to the exploration of the Silk Road, sit on the camels and hiking in the vast desert. Before leaving, we took a photo together to memorize a trip in front of the caves. We all will treasure every moment we spend there.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词或形式。
Recent, we have discussed the ways of traveling. Here is the result. Some students choose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s why they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite tourist spots. What’s more, it’s a chance for us to learn to look after themselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I wanted to spend enough time visiting the place where I like. In this way, I can enjoy a vacation better.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Oh, a pity! It’s raining again? Is everybody here? Good. Now listen carefully. I wish the weather is better here for you. It’s very usual to have so and so much snow and rain here at this time of year.
Some of you are asking about tomorrow’s activity on the way here. Well, we’re going to climb the mountain unless the weather gets much better during the night. OK? So, provided that it doesn’t snow too heavy tonight, I’ll see you back here at six o'clock. Set your alarms for 5:30. We’ll take our breakfast with them because we won’t reach the top of the mountain unless we set out early, before it’s light. So be there tomorrow morning with everything you need. You’ve all got a list—you need a whistle in case you get separated from the rest of the group, warm waterproof clothing and gloves, and a good pair of boots. Don’t forget to bring maps I gave you yesterday. I’d rather you didn’t bring large cameras and video cameras.
It’s time we had dinner now, so if that anyone has any questions, you can ask me on the way to the dining hall. Let’s go.
