增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mary,
My name is Li Hua, a 18-year-old student from Eton middle school. To help the old people in the nursing home, my classmates and me will go there this Sunday. As the monitor of Class Two, I wanted to invite you to go with us.
Here are some information about this activity. To begin with, we will leave for our school by bus at 8 a.m, but return at 5 p.m. Besides, there will be a lot of activity such as making dumplings and giving performances, that will be not only interesting but also meaningful.
Hopeful, you will like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Looking forward your reply and your decision.
Yours,
Li Hua
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The other day, I together with several friends went back to a nearby hospital to do some voluntary works. We helped some patients cleaned their rooms and did everything we could to serve them. I noticed a little girl between the patients. She was weak, so she was lovely and active. She asked to sing a song for us in return for our kindness. Stood in front of us, she began to sing. Greatly to our surprise, her voice was so beautifully that it fascinated us all. After that, we had the talk with her. She told us that her wish was to become a singer. We encourage her to follow her dream.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last year, our class paid a visit a local nursing home. After arrive there, we saw some elder doing Tai chi. They gave us an impression of being energetic but healthy. But there was also some old people seated in the wheelchair. They were out of the shape, which made me a few sad. They must have experienced a hard life in the past. During that visit, we chat with the old and did some cleaning here. We had such a good time. This year, we plan to visit it again and hope more people care about the old so that they can be healthy, peace and happy for the rest of their life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, we paid visit to the Sunset Nursing Home, that is very close to our school. On our arrival, we begin to help the old people do the cleaning. Then, some of my classmate put on an interesting perform before we played games with them. All of the old people were amusing and laughed happily. We had so many fun that we almost forgot the time. At noon, we were all had to say goodbye to us. They were extremely grateful to our visit.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago,I was chosen by my classmate to take part an English speech competition.When go up to the stage,I felt nervous.At the once,my mother's words came to me,"If you want to succeed,it costs nothing and self-confidence."Since I had the chance to standing here,it meant that I had the ability.I said to myself,"Have you forgotten that you have prepared for this competition for a longer time?You are the best."Strange,my nervousness disappeared.I spoke very fluently that all the audience cheers after my speech.I was successful!
增加：在却此处加一个篓子符号（˄）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删掉：把多余的词用（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, some of my classmates and I went to the West Lake for fun. I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish throw about by visitors. He was obviously having great difficulty collect some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea was occurred to me. Why not help him collect rubbish? Much of their joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing help. So we work hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted but waved farewell to the thankful dustman. Tiredly as I was, I felt very happy. I truly believe we’ll have an harmonious society if everybody takes action. How a fine deed!
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Generally spoken, the relationship between students and people around us was good. We are getting on well with each other. Therefore, there still exist some problems. Some students lose his temper easily because of learning burden. They sometimes quarrel with others, that is very disappointing. In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts improve the situation. Firstly, we should respect for other people. Secondly, when we are not feeling happily, we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents. It is likely that they can give us some reasonable advices. Last but not least, we can trying to make some changes in our way of life.
