增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have planned an autumn outing for my class the next week, and I’m writing to ask your permission.
First, the place where we’ve decided to visit – the Forest Park is not far away from the city. We can take a bus and ride a bike to get there. Second, the trip would provide us with a great opportunity to get closely to nature. Third, we need to spare some times to take some physical exercise. Some teachers will join us to make sure of our safe.
We are all looking forward to receive your permission. We would appreciate you if you can kindly give us an immediate reply.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend, our class went on a interesting camping trip. All the way we enjoy the beautiful scenery and fresh air. However, many of us didn’t notice the badly effects on the environment due to our behavior. Some of us threw rubbish here or there, left words on famous buildings, picked flowers and spoke loudly in public, etc.
What these students did are against the spirit of eco-travel. True eco-travel is a journey in which not only allows us to express our love for nature but also needs our responsibility. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we can’t damage them. Only when we improve our aware of eco-travel can our earth becomes more and more beautiful. After all, the earth is the only place for us live on.
We had a school trip on last Sunday. Hundreds of us students took part in it excited.
At 8: 00 am, we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries. When someone fall behind, others would come or offer help. About two hours later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed myself. What wonderful time!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teacher I loved most was my English teacher at senior high school.She was one of those strict teacher but she was very patiently with us and cared about each one of us.So we all respected for her.She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teach us literature and how to writing.She always writes helpful suggestions for writing,organizing and presented better work.She encouraged us to read and write for pleasure,that gave us confidence.She always made us feel happy in his class.She made big difference to our lives.
That’s why I teach now.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a senior high student, I should put much time and energy into English study than before. So I had already made a English study plan. First, in order to increase my vocabulary, I will do some reading as frequent as possible. Second, I will keep watching English movies because it considered to be the best way to learn about different cultures. Third, I think keep a diary in English is one of the effective way to improve my English writing ability. Fourth, I will learn from others but try my best to improve learning methods. What’s more, I plan to practise your spoken English and communicate, with classmates in English. I do hope for my English will be better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This Monday afternoon we had a class meeting. Our head teacher ask us to talk about our study plans in the coming college entrance examination. It was really a heating discussion. Everybody took an actively part in it. Some students say they will focus more in class instead of being absent-mind now and then. Some say they will be more organized and have much self-control, for time is so limited but pressing. Others say they will keep an eye on past mistake made in their test papers because they can’t afford to repeat them again. As for me, I will do what I can make my dream come true.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处， 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, Zhang Pingyu paid visit to London. Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the site she wanted to see. It was the Tower which she visited first. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had been remained standing for one thousand years. In the past, many new buildings expanded around it. Therefore, it was still part of a royal palace and prison combined. There followed St Paul’s Cathedral built after the terrible fire of London in 1666. It looked splendidly when first built. Westminster Abbey, too, was very interesting. Then just as he came out of the abbey, Pingyu heard the famous sound of the clock Big Ben ring out the hour.
The next day Pingyu was leaving to Windsor Castle. “Perhaps I will see the Queen？” she wondered as she fall asleep.
