增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teacher I loved most was my English teacher at senior high school.She was one of those strict teacher but she was very patiently with us and cared about each one of us.So we all respected for her.She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teach us literature and how to writing.She always writes helpful suggestions for writing,organizing and presented better work.She encouraged us to read and write for pleasure,that gave us confidence.She always made us feel happy in his class.She made big difference to our lives.
That’s why I teach now.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I first came to senior high school, it was hard for me to keep up in class and near dropped out. The problem was what I was not confident. Then coming Miss Li, my English teacher. She told me to try much hard. Whenever I lost heart, he would encourage me: You can make it. I spent a plenty of time memorizing words. We meet in her office each morning and she would urge me read English for at least 20 minutes. Eventually, something amazed happened and I got high marks in English. I really owe my great progresses to my teacher.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My school life in the Britain is significantly different. The school day is nearly 5.5 hours short than that in China. Students there are friendly and focus their studies. With his help, I have adapted to the life soon and make lots of new friends. I feel so luckily to be able to participate in class discussion, that I've learn a lot about local culture. I enjoy the report for the teachers and teachers and the country. Besides I have learnt many skill about completing my projects. My experience is amazed and enjoyable because of my wonderful host family, my friends or the teachers.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
While it comes to how to face a challenge, I think of my experience in learning maths.
When I was in junior middle school, I had great difficulties in learning maths. To change a situation, I made great efforts. Firstly, I bought some reference books and got prepared before class, make it easy for me to understand that the teacher would teach. Secondly, I listened attentive in class and took notes carefully, which helped my accumulate basic knowledge. Thirdly, I did my homework on time and turn to my teacher for help when I had problems. Finally I caught with others.
Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. Faced with challenges, I respond positively and overcome with them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限—词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11 处起) 不计分。
As we all know, being a teacher is not easy job. A teacher who has to play too many roles like an educator, a guide, a conductor, a director and sometimes a parent, either! We all have at least one favorite teacher more like a friend to us in our lives, but we are always sincerely grateful to them for all the love and guidance. The hard work, time and patience that teachers devote with students, without doubt, is beyond compare. They are simply strong pillars behind building any nation. They work tireless without any complaint to enrich the lives of on-going generations. To acknowledge the amazed value of their efforts, we are supposed to send them special cards or gifts on their graduation day. In this way, we would be able to deliver our thanks to those inspirational teacher in the most beautiful manner.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
How are you recently, my dear friend? Now I will tell you something about your English teacher, Mr. Lee.
Mr. Lee is forty year old. He has a happy family in the city, and he usual goes to visit his wife’s parents in the countryside with his family. He’s outgoing and get along well with us students. His classes are very interested. After class, he often helps us of our English. He never smokes. He likes sports. It is saying that he has kept swimming for 20 years. He is especially good playing the chess. My classmate like him and all think he is not only a good teacher also a good friend. Can you tell me something about your teacher?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Yan is a Senior One student. And she is one of my classmate. She has been awarded the title of “Student of the Week” for that she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yan went downtown and walked from one store to another, looked for the clothes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us was comfortably enjoying our leisure time in cool rooms, she spent on the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she finds the right clothes. Deeply moving by the efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.
Li Yan is always warm-hearted girl who cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping another people. She deserves the honor but we should learn from her.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The school Dance Club aims to enrich students’ school life and encouraging students to take part in different dancing activities. If you’re good at or interesting in dancing, the dance club is exactly that you are looking for. Here are the requirements that you need to pay attention. There is no doubt that your interest in dancing is a must. Beside, you are more likely to be admitted unless you can organize events or have dancing experiences. Additionally, we high appreciate a strong sense of responsibility and good team spirit.
If you wanted to join us, please turn in your application before the October 30. For more informations, please contact us at danceclub123@ email.com.
【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our school holds a Chinese classical music festival in the concert hall to promote Chinese traditional culture. All the students took part in of it.
During the festival, classics played by Chinese classical instrument, such as erhu and Chinese zither, were amazed. Among them, High Mountain or Flowing Water drew the most attention. Besides, that interested the students most was that an opportunity was providing to learn these instruments from some experts.
The festival turned out to be success. Having participated in it, all of we realized that we should be great responsible for inheriting and popularizing our traditional culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last month I got a chance to take part in our school basketball match. I took the place with my classmate, Wang Bin, who had been serious injured before the match. During the match, I try my best to move and pass the ball. I shot a couple of time but I scored none, what made me very worried. All my teammates comforted me but they gave me a lot of encourage. We played as a team and did everything we could win the match. In an end, we won 65-63. It was a fantastic memory that would be worth treasuring it forever.
