增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Steven,
From your letter , I know it is hard for you to make friends . The following suggestion are possibly of some help to you.
To begin with,walking to your classmates and talk with them.After several talks,you will happy find that they are likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually,you will enjoy each other company.Besides,you’d better to give them a hand when they are in trouble.Lastly,it is advisable to participate for different kinds of activities,which you can communicate with different people.
All in all,follow my advice above,and you would find that it isn’t big deal to make some friends.
Yours,
Jack
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （∧） ，并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\） 划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2． 只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分．
My grandpa is a retired teacher． He used to teaching in the school of his village． At that time he was only teacher in the school which taught all the grades all the subjects． He worked there for nearly forty years． He was so busy that he hardly had time for his families． During those years， grandpa was willing devoted to his work． Since his retirement， great changes have been taken place in his village but a new school building has been completed． Today the students will move into the new building． For the invitation of the school， grandpa will give a talk to the teachers and students as a guest of honor． Grandpa is exciting about it． He will give a gift to the school， which is a name list of all the students he teaches．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改：在错词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There was a big fire in one office buildings in our neighborhood at about nine o'clock last night. Many firemen and fire engines come. In a beginning, we saw flames with thick black smoke coming out from the six floor. We also heard the explosion the gas tank mix with the noisy sounds from the windows. Soon the fire spread one by one to the floors above, but finally reached the top floor. Many people stood outside on the streets watch the fire in horror. Unluckily there was no one in that office building when the fire broke out in.
