1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
In your last letter, you tell me that you got fat and didn’t enjoy good health, that made me worried. Now I want to give you some way to keep fit. I think doing exercise and keeping a balanced diet is important for our health. Doing exercise is not necessary for us. It is helpful to keep fit and get their body and mood ready to a busy day. A balanced diet means a lot to good health because it is wise to eat nutritious food. And the sooner we develop a good eating habit, the good it is. I’d like you take what I said into consideration.
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It generally believed that regular exercise keeps the body firm and strong. So I usually go jog as a form of exercise. A hour’s physical exercise every day makes me to feel healthier and more energetic. Besides, I don’t smoke or drink wine, so do I stay up late. Instead, I keep a balance diet and go to bed early. More importantly, I always keep an optimistic attitude from life, holding the belief what a bright future and a peaceful world are ahead of us human beings. To sum up, both of these practices guarantee a healthy body and a life full of happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With society develops fast, many people think that we must have two friends in our life. One is the library and the another is the playground. If we can make friend with the library, which means we can have enough new books to read. As we know it, information changes so fast and reading can make us wise and intelligent. On other hand, if we have the playground, we can take daily exercise to strengthen our body.
Although I am busy with my study, I still tried to spare some time to read some books and to do some sports every day. After I go to bed, I read some books included literature and news for 15 minutes. And if possible, I sometimes get up 30 minutes early than usual to walk to school instead of taking a bus. Then I can be strong, smart and happy forever.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have many problems with my behavior when I was in fifth grade. My mom was really concerning about me. In order to make sure I developed good habits, and she made specific rules for me. For instance, I couldn’t play those game, I had to keep doing exercise to keep fit, and I should active say hello when meeting someone I knew. In fact, I didn’t like greeting others, but he put stress on the importance of that. Besides, my mom didn’t allow me to eating junk food because she thought my health might be on risk. Understanding my mom’s concerns, I did all the things what were allowed by her with appreciation.
I have changed a lot since I take up running. Before I started running, I seldom did exercise. As a result of, I often fell ill. Once I was very weak that I fell down when having a P.E.class. From now on, I decided to exercise to make me strong. I kept running every morning whenever the weather was like. After running for half year, I found that I seldom caught a cold and I was much healthy than before. So far, I’ve learned that exercise is extreme important. It not only improves my health but also make me feel more relaxed.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
As we all know, walking is a good way of exercising and is beneficial of our health. It can not only reduce the risk of many kind of diseases but also builds up the bones. It’s safe than many other ways of exercising, especially for the elderly and it’s easy to do without consider rules. Beside, walking can also help us lose weight. What should we pay attention during the walk? First, we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so as that we can relax. Second, we should walk fast enough to cause us to breathe with difficult but still be able to talk. Third, it’s huge important to walk with our arms moving freely. Most importantly, we should do it every day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Health
Ladies and gentlemen, I’m honor to share the topic “health” with you. As an old saying go, health is above wealth. You must feel the same way. Without health, we can’t achieve that we set out to do. With health, how can we catch up with the rapidly changed world? In brief, health is anything.
To keep health, we should have a balanced diet and form good living habits. In addition, we should also take on enough exercise and keep a good state of mind. In conclusion, I personal believe a healthy life is the source of happiness. So let’s keep eye on our health and enjoy a healthy life. Thank you.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Rope skipping is a sport suitable for people of all age. People skip rope for fun and exercise. Every student was able to learn to skip. You can skip alone or with your classmates. If you skip alone, you will need short rope about double the length of your high. You should turn the rope slow so that you can skip safely. It might help with if you can sing a rhyme while skips. When you skip rope, your heart beats fast than usual and your body is stressed. Therefore, stop for a rest after you injure yourself.
So, pick up a rope, finding a silly rhyme and start skipping.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I love sports very much. When I was child, my father often takes me to watch basketball matches. Gradually, sports have become part of his life. When I started to go to school, I joined in the school basketball team. I spent a lot of time practise with my friends then. Now, though high school life is extremely busy and there is few free time, I still keep taking exercise every day. My favorite are sports meeting time, when I can take part in different activity, such as football, basketball and high jump. I enjoy doing sports but I am always full of energy. Sports make me happy and keep me healthily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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