增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love sports very much. When I was child, my father often takes me to watch basketball matches. Gradually, sports have become part of his life. When I started to go to school, I joined in the school basketball team. I spent a lot of time practise with my friends then. Now, though high school life is extremely busy and there is few free time, I still keep taking exercise every day. My favorite are sports meeting time, when I can take part in different activity, such as football, basketball and high jump. I enjoy doing sports but I am always full of energy. Sports make me happy and keep me healthily.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, we had made a survey of people on physical training. Only 35 percent of people were surveyed have taken part on physical activities. Over half of the people say they haven’t been got enough time to take exercise. 34.9 percent of them say they don’t have place where they can relax themselves and that there is not enough training equipment. Another 12.9 percent of the people feel that they lives too far away from the training centers. Some of whom even don’t know how to training.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good healthy. People should realize the significance of it, and measures should be took to provide people with training equipment.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The 31st World University Games have been successful held in Chengdu, putting sports back in the spotlight. I’d like to share with you the benefits of sports as well as my personal experiences or feelings about it. Sports do have lots of advantage. Taking exercise helps us build up a strong body. It also makes our well-behaved and confident. Do sports with friends can help us lead colorful life as well. But too many exercise can do more harm than you think, so plan activities properly. I often go running with my father, what I find really fun and cool and sticking on running gives me great satisfaction. Life lay in movement. Let’s take exercise together.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It generally believed that regular exercise keeps the body firm and strong. So I usually go jog as a form of exercise. A hour’s physical exercise every day makes me to feel healthier and more energetic. Besides, I don’t smoke or drink wine, so do I stay up late. Instead, I keep a balance diet and go to bed early. More importantly, I always keep an optimistic attitude from life, holding the belief what a bright future and a peaceful world are ahead of us human beings. To sum up, both of these practices guarantee a healthy body and a life full of happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I chose to spread knowledge in a rural school rather than donate some used books and stationary, that I think shows equality and respect to those being helped. On my arrive after a long and rough ride, I was greeted by exciting students with great enthusiasm. They felt, curiously when I told them my plan to teach them scientific experiments. It took a week that I was ready to start. I demonstrated, guided them to conduct the experiments and explain the principles.
Looking at their widening eyes, I was happy to see that the seed of science had planted in their hearts. As a volunteer, I expect for no material, rewards. Beside, nothing is more rewarding than to help the kids to develop his curiosity about science.
增加:在缺词处加个漏宁符号(˄), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的问用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It happened in Friday. Tom is the first to come to the classroom. When he came up to his seat, however, he found his bench broke. Seeing there was nobody around, he decided to change it with John's, so he did. After the while, John came. When he saw the broken bench, he carried it out of the classrooms. Tom didn't know why he was going to do. So Tom came out, find that John had begun to repair the broken bench. Tom's face turned into red. She said to John, “Let's fix it together.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I would like share an experience with you. It was happened a few years ago. One day I was going to be late, but I hurried to school. Suddenly I ran into a man and all my books drop onto the ground. I shouted at him. He just smiled and helped us pick up all the books. While I got to my class, our teacher said a new teacher would replace him. The new teacher was a same person I had treated rude. I was sure I'd leave a poor impression to him but he didn't treat me differently. I learned we should always be polite to stranger.