增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一条横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Dear Jim,
I am glad to tell you something about the interesting Chinese naming practice.
Like the tradition in America, the family name in China is put first, be followed by the given name, Chinese people often named a baby with their best wish for good health and happiness. Some even go crazily about the names indicating the weather or the natural phenomenon at time of a baby's birth. When combined characters into a name, parents need to consider what it sounds. As for your Chinese name, how about "Ji Xiang"? The first character has a pronunciation similar
with that of your name Jim, and all of the characters mean “good luck”. I hope you'll love this Chinese name.
Yours
Li hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
The old saying “The early bird catches the worm.” show us the importance of planning, working hard and trying constantly. To achieve outstanding results, the most people must plan ahead and work hard to overcome all kind of difficulties.
That has been my own experience, either. When I first started at high school, I seldom passed my exam, so I never prepared well. Later, my teacher, Mr. Black, advised me plan everything in advance. She asked me to study hard as well. After a year of put his advice into practice, I can now easy pass all my exams.
There are no direct roads to succeed.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I had a valuable experience working like a volunteer in the community hospital. I worked from July 15 to July 31, when elderly over 55 were given freely medical examinations. Every day I arrive early and organized the people who came over. Then I would help him fill in the forms. Lead them to the different departments was also one of my duty. Everyone there worked in a tight schedule. By the time their examinations were over, I was already bathing in sweat. Tired though I was, but I benefited a lot from the experience as I built up my confident and improved my communication skills.
