1 . 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

By the time Tom graduated from Yale University, he has undertaken a part-time job for 3 years, from that he accumulated abundant experience. However, he was much cast down by his failure to find a satisfying job. It occur to him that he should apply to the position provide by that large company. A great many applicant participated in the interview. Apparent, the competition was fierce. The advantage was which he had a good command of English. He owed to his first English teacher that he had a good pronunciation. Fortunately, all his efforts were not in the vain and he succeeded in finding his ideal job.