1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last weekend, I was browsing TikTok when a short video drew my attentions, which exactly showed people how to make an amazed fruit plate. Then I decided to give them a try. First I collected some fruits like apples, oranges, grapes, strawberries or bananas. After washing and peeled them, I focused the creation which took me about thirty minutes. To my delight, I won highly praise from my parents for that I had made. Making a fruit plate not only relaxes my mind but improve my practical abilities. I can't to wait to make another nutritious fruit plate.