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I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. You've made a wise choose to travel there. As we all know it, Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions, enjoy many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou is well-known as its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clearly and looks colorful. It can excite visitors' imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It is built twenty century ago. And it is still playing so important part in irrigation today. Beside, the nice weather and convenience transportation there can make your trip more enjoyable.
We are very glad to have the chance to visit to the British Museum. No other museums can take place of the British Museum. It is a famous tourist attraction for tourist all over the world. It consists of many showrooms, one of what is the showroom of China. It was divided into several parts to display different objects from China. When you look around the showroom, it may seem strangely to you that Britain should have taken so much valuable things from China.
If you don't have enough time or don't want to leave out something, I suggest that you should make a list of the things you want to see. While visited the museum, you should keep your eyes open.
Canada is country located in the northern part of North America. The country expands in the Atlantic to the Pacific, covered 9.98 million square kilometers. Canada is the second large country by total area. Canada’s southern border with the United States are the world’s longest bi-national land border. Most of it land is covered by forests. Its capital is Ottawa, that is the center of politics and culture. Canada’s climate changes wide across its vast area. Though Canada is often connected with cold weather and snow, but in fact, there are different kind of climates.
We had a geography lesson about the Sahara in last week. It's a large desert,the world largest,in fact. It is near equal to the United States in size and cover more than 9 million square kilometers. It is more than 4,600 kilometers from east to west but 1,600 kilometers from north to south. The Sahara has a very dry climate. An average annual rainfall is not even 10 centimeters,and worse still,many areas received less than 2 centimeters per year. There is few surface water in the Sahara. The Nile river does running across the Sahara,and there are some green places,but the surface is still dry. Of the green places in the Sahara,about 90%of them are large enough support tiny villages.
I am glad to learn that you will study in Beijing as a exchange student and I’d like introduce the Great Wall to you.
It is known to you that Beijing has a large number of tourist attractions, among where the Great Wall stands out. The Great Wall is a historic cultural heritage but also a symbol of China. However, just as the saying goes, “He who haven’t been to the Great Wall isn’t a true man.” Climb the Great Wall is a great way to test and develop your will as well as your strengths.
The above is for the reason why I recommend it. I hope my introduction will be helpful.
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Some theme parks are not only amusing but also educational. Take the PCC in Hawaii as example. The PCC is setting in 42 acres of beautiful countryside where visitors can see seven different traditional Polynesian island village. Villagers from many island communities come to show visitors its styles of dress and different customs. You can learn how they make clothes from bark(树皮) and what they climb very tall trees with their bare feet. They also tell you about their social customs and showing you their cooking methods and their dances. Their most important skill is boat-building, that allows the islanders to explore all the islands around. We know that their history they were sea travellers moved from island to island. Now they use those boat-building skills to make long boats and show the races and battles that they took part in them long ago.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
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2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ m glad to hear that you were visiting FuJian for your holiday. I am writing to tell you that something about Wu Yi Mountain. Locate in the northwest of FuJian Province, it is a wonderful tourist attraction. The weather there is mild on summer. What’ s more importantly is that it is famous as a holy tourist site. Not only can I appreciate the impressive scenery, but you can also learn many about the culture of it. It also has a large number of fantastic Chinese building.
There is no doubt whether a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be truly unforgettable experience. I wish you a nice trip!
Long long ago, people had gather leaves and 1.
fruit of plants to eat with. They didn’t know how 2.
to plant crops or how to keep animals for their 3.
food. We call them Stone Age people. Thing for 4.
them were terrible and hard. Now there have still 5.
some people living liked those Stone Age people. 6.
They live in places that are hard reach. They do not 7.
know of our invention, for they keep themselves 8.
away our civilized world. For many years a group of 9.
people call Aruntas have lived alone in the center. 10.
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.