增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you ask about in the last e-mail.
Edinburgh, located in the southeast of Scotland, was the capital city of Scotland as well as their political and cultural center. It covers a area of 264 square kilometers with only a small population 1. 33 million. With the airport lain in the center of the city, it is convenient for people to go around. Close to the seaside, Edinburgh has a mild climate, that makes it one of the most popular tourism city in the UK. It also has absolute splendid ancient architecture, like the Edinburgh Castle.
I will be happy to guide you around our city if you will come here.
Yours,
Harry
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm writing to tell you our plan to visit to Mount Huangshan. I'd be very happy to accompany you to go here.
Mount Huangshan, locating in southern Anhui Province, famous for its fantastic scenery. Mount Huangshan has more famous scenic attractions than many another mountains in China. It is especial well known for the beautifully-shaped pine tree, clouds and rocks. The hot springs, that come out from deep underground, are suitable to bathe in and even to drink.
As it was often cloudy and rainy on the mountain, it would be better to bring a raincoat and wear the suitable pair of shoes. Let's meet at 7：40 at the school gate this Saturday morning. Looking forward to seeing you.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer, I visited to Sun Yat-sen University. It was founded by Sun Yat-sen and has educational tradition of more than 100 years. Today, it is South China’s center of academic research or talent development. Besides its excellent academic reputation, their campus is like a big beautiful park, that the air is fresh and everything is green. That place is quiet and clean. While walked along the paths, you can hear the sweet songs of bird. It all adds to the elegant of the campus. It has many traditional buildings, which combined characteristics of southern Chinese homes with Western structures so good that you can have a sense of coziness and curiosity.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ m glad to hear that you were visiting FuJian for your holiday. I am writing to tell you that something about Wu Yi Mountain. Locate in the northwest of FuJian Province, it is a wonderful tourist attraction. The weather there is mild on summer. What’ s more importantly is that it is famous as a holy tourist site. Not only can I appreciate the impressive scenery, but you can also learn many about the culture of it. It also has a large number of fantastic Chinese building.
There is no doubt whether a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be truly unforgettable experience. I wish you a nice trip!
5 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week，my friends invited me go camping to see the sunrise．I felt so exciting and asked for my parents’permission．Luckily，he agreed．We got to the mountain top that we would stay for a whole night．We were singing together while one of my friends were playing the guitar．The next morning，we wake up at about five o'clock．We could not wait to see the sun to come up．After a while，we saw the red color light up the sky gradual．It was so amazing scenery．The beauty in nature impressed me at that moment．
