增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday, I invited Alan to my house to spend the Mid-Autumn Festival. While we were wait for a big lunch, both Alan and I felt hungry. After having the big lunch, we felt full of energetic. In the afternoon, my mother taught Alan and me to make mooncakes, which made us especially exciting. We listened my mother carefully and made the mooncakes with great patience. At the last, we made some beautiful mooncakes. In the evening, we ate the mooncakes made by themselves and enjoyed my father’s stories about the festival. Late, Alan told me that he would never forget the day where we celebrated the Mid-Autumn Festival together. He hoped that he could spent many other traditional Chinese festival in my house.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的问。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限-词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to celebrated National Day and the Mid-Autumn Festival, and we had an 8-day holiday. After it, my classmates and I were talking about how to do during the holiday excitedly. Then we decided to go to help the farmers instead of stay at home. As soon as we arrived at farm, we were attracted by the apples hanging on the branches. We couldn't wait to pick the apples, which were the most interesting work. Particular, we were allowed to choose what we liked best and taste them. We didn't feel boring at all even though the job was tiring. We worked for 5 hours happily unless the sun set.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Recently, we have had a heated debate on if we should develop the cultural site that is discovered in our city last year. Some people agree the idea. They think a cultural site is worth developing, because it will make people to learn more about the history of our country. What’s more, the cultural site can attract more visitors to our city, where will be good for the tourist industry. However, the other hold a different opinion, think that we should keep it as it is and protect it. Only in this way can it not be destroyed. I think we should ask some experts in this field for advices to find a better way to make well use of this cultural site.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Henry,
I am writing to invite you to attend the Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to held in the art gallery from 9:00 am to 4:00 pm the next Saturday in the City Museum.
Paper-cutting is a traditionally art form in China, which had a history of more than 1,500 years. People often decorate their homes with paper-cutting during festivals and weddings. In this exhibition, you can see paper-cutting with various pattern. In addition, they are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper in the spot. I hope that you can seize this opportunity to learn much about traditional Chinese culture.
The exhibition is well worth attended. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Have you heard from Black Friday in the US?On this day, store will offer special deals. Shoppers will often wake up very early wait in line at stores after they open. Sometimes the crowds will be so big that it was impossible to get inside the stores. Sometimes they fight over the things because there are only a few are left.
Well, China has anything like it called Singles’ Day Singles’ Day is one of the biggest shopping days what are popular among Chinese young people. It always falls on a day of November 11th Many people stay up lately that night shopping on line to get big savings .
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Andrew,
I'd like to invite you to the coming Christmas party, what will take place on the second floor of the dining hall as expect.
It is the celebration for the Christmas Eve. You are welcome to make the short speech. After that we'll have some funs together, singing, dancing and playing games. Then we'll enjoy a candle light dinner, tasted a variety of delicious food. Eventually, members of the English club will exchange gifts.I'm sure it will be a warmly get-together.
I'd appreciate if you could come and join us. The party will start at 6 pm and lasts about three hours. We'd like to meet you at the school gate at 5:50 pm on this evening.
We're looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画—横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears.
Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.