增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lucy,
My classmates and I intend to go to the nursing home to spend a Double Ninth Festival with the old people there. I am writing to invite you go with us.
According to our schedule, we will leave from our school at 8 o'clock in the morning and returned at around 4 o'clock in the afternoon. On arrive there, we will give them an excellent performance, what I believe will bring a lot of happiness to them. After that, we will do some other meaningfully activities, including doing a thorough cleaning and making dumpling. Accompanied by us, the old people will surely enjoy ourselves and feel very happy. However, I really hope you can join in us if it is convenient to you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua