增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
On April 5, to celebrate the Qingming Festival, our class organize a trip to the Memorial of Crossing the-Yangtze-River Campaign, that lies on the north bank of the Chaohu Lake in Hefei. The main building of the Memorial looks like a huge warship. How impressively the sight is! At the first, we together presented flowers to honoring those great people. They fought for the free of our country. But then we toured around the Memorial. We viewed the pictures and valuable object of that time and listened the guide’s introduction. Only then did we truly began to realize the importance of peace.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On New Year’s Day I went to a stamp exhibition, what proved to be an unique experience. At 9:30, I arrived at the exhibition with my precious stamp album, eagerly and excited. To my delighted, there gathered crowds of stamp lovers. I joined them immediate and studied the stamps one by one. The artists’ delicate design appealed to me but I wanted to learn more. Then, some of us got together to share with our collections, chatting cheerfully about the stamps. We even told stories behind it like old friends. Time permits, I would have communicated more with the friends. On the whole, not only I appreciate beautiful stamps, but also I made new friends with the same interest. This was really a special celebration for the New Year.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
How is everything going? I can still remember the days that we spend together when you taught English in China. When you went back to America the last month, you said you expected to get a Chinese name stamp especial made for you, for it is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m so glad to tell you that you have already found a stamp craftsman, that lives in my city now. He is experienced but skilled at making name stamp.
In order to make a stamp that suits you best, I have attached a great variety pictures of characters, designs and materials to the email. You can chose whichever of them you prefer.
Looking forward to receive your reply. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
I was really exciting when my dad told me that a British girl was coming to our house for several day. I thought she would be typical western girl with blond hair and blue eyes. But when I step out of my room, I was surprised to find a Chinese girl smiling sweetly at me and greet me in poor Chinese. She told to me that she was born in England and couldn’t speak much Chinese. We got along well and I showed her many wonderfully things in Chinese culture. She was very happy and kept ask questions. Time passed very quickly that before we knew it, it was time for me to leave. And I saw her off at the airport.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? Since you are interesting in the shadow play, I’d like to introduce it to you.
As the traditional Chinese folk art, the shadow play has been existed in China for centuries. It dates back to the Han Dynasty, where Emperor Liu Che lost his beloved wife Li. Depressed about his death, he even ignores the state affairs, worrying his officials. Then they made a puppet with the image of Li but performed before the Emperor. He was too pleased that he asked them to spread the art form.
Unfortunately, it is becoming more attractive due to the impact of modern media. Both Chinese artists and the government are making joint efforts conserve the ancient art form.
If you want to know more, don’t hesitate to contact me. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Is it necessary to practise handwriting? Some students consider handwriting least important than before. They preferred the keyboard to the pen now, for it is fast, convenient an clear. They think it is waste of time practising handwriting. However, others think Chinese handwriting is an important part of our traditional culture. Though computers are very convenient, but handwriting still plays an important role in the modern world. Beside, beautiful handwriting makes a good impression in others. It shows your attitude to do things. Chinese character are very beautiful and rich in culture. As for me, when reading a neat written article, you will feel pleased and relaxed.
Ted, a British boy, along with his parents was invite to visit a Chinese calligraphy exhibition in London on last Saturday. They were exciting to have such a good chance to have a close look at the traditional Chinese culture. On the show they enjoyed various fine work with great admiration. To their joy, they saw some Chinese artists giving live performances with brush pens. Ted couldn’t help approach an elderly Chinese artist, which was writing attentively with a big brush pen. Ted watched with great interest but asked the artist to show her how to use the brush pen. The artist agreed and gave him some instruction patient. Then Ted couldn’t wait to have a try. He admit he was deeply attracted by the Chinese calligraphy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Halloween is on first day of November, and it was very popular in some western countries. On that day, people, especial kids, dress in horrible styles. We knock from door to door. Where people don’t give them to sweets, the kids will play tricks on them. In China, more and more young people like to follow this trend. They’d like to join on some activities on that day. They wear strangely clothes and find some funs. When the night comes, they always have a party, sing and dancing together.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
So happy am I to learn that you are coming to China and would stay at my home during the Chinese New Year. My parents and I am very pleased to have them with us. Now please allow me to tell you that we have arranged for you. My family will arrange large number of things for you to do in the morning. After that, I’ll show you around and take you to some places of interests. At night, we’ll most stay at home watch the Spring Festival Gala, playing mahjong, and chatting with people. I firmly believe in that we’ll have a wonderful time but enjoy each other’s company.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Let me share with you the meaningful day I had. I took Jack, a student from England, experience some Chinese cultures on last Sunday. In the morning, Jack and I visited a museum in the center of the city, which many cultural relics in the Ming Dynasty was on show. In the afternoon, we went to the cinema to watch a Chinese animated film naming Ne Zha, which deep moved us. In the evening, I teach Jack to make dumplings at my house. He learned very quickly that he mastered the skill in no time. Tasting the dumplings made by ourselves, they felt a great sense of achievement.