增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I went to a museum nearby and had a good time here. I got up early in the morning. It was sunny, so I decide to bicycle to make a greener travel. After about an hour’s ride, I finally arrived at entrance. I had my ticket check quickly and walked into the museum, following a group of visitors with a tour guide, which was really knowledgeable. She gave each exhibit to a vivid description. What impressed me most were the development of Chinese characters. This visit not only increased our interest in Chinese history, and broadened my horizons.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During last summer vocation, my parents and I went on a road trip along National Highway 318 (G318), where links Shanghai in the east to Tibet in the west. It is the longest and most attraction national highway in China. I felt real cheerful after we set out. Appreciated many famous scenic spots along the way, we were deeply impressed on the breathtaking scenery from Sichuan to Tibet. Meanwhile, diverse customs and tradition of native peoples enabled us have a deeper insight into our motherland and people. We saw white clouds floating with a super fresh air greatly refreshing our mind, body or spirit. This 10-day journey left us with a vivid memory. What an awesome journey it was one!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
I'm preparing for a trip to Rome, Italy, which I'm exciting about. In fact, I don't travel much outside China, or I often travel inside China. Last year, I flew to Beijing to visit my cousin who lives there. The flight was lasted four hours from where I live. In Beijing, we went to Tian'anmen Square watch the raising of the national flag, and climbed the Great Wall. We had great funs. Now, I'm waiting with my suitcases for a taxi to take myself to the airport. It's said that a journey by air will be such long that it will take 20 hours. Think of the wonderful places there, I can't real wait.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My parents and I had a family visit in Xi’an, the old city with a long history in China. We tasted the true home-cooked dishes in the home in which we visited. For in-homing dinner, the host would prepare a list of menus by advance. Our tour guide asked for advices about the food, so the host would try to cook what we choose to eat at his home. We real enjoyed the locally cooked dishes. What’s more, the host taught us what to make dumplings step by step. Though dumplings created with badly dressed appearance, we felt happy to enjoy the fruits of our labor. The family visit in Xi’an was a good chance for them to know Chinese people’s daily lifestyles and it was a lot more excited than we had expected.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom.
How are you doing! I am writing to invite you visit the new museum in ours city with me this Sunday morning. The museum, which opens last month, is said to be great and real worth visiting. We will meet at 7 o’clock at a school gate. Then we will take No. 7 bus and it will take the bus 45 minute to take us there. There are many valuable pictures, paintings and sculptures on display in the museum, showed the long and colorfully history of our city. I am sure we will learn a lot of more about the history of our city and have a good time. If you are free and interesting, please get ready ahead of time and join me.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, my family and me spent the whole holiday on an amazed island in Hainan Province. The island is very big and there are lots of things to see and do. We stay in a comfortable hotel and went swimming every day because the beautiful weather. We also tried the local food. There were the number of traditional restaurants on the island, and we ate there every evening! To my surprises, I put on about three kilos during the holiday, when I didn’t really like. We also visited many interesting sights, and like the local museum that I found very impressively. We had a great time there and I’d really love to going there again someday!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My parents and I decided to visit Hong Kong for our holidays in last summer. I was very happy because I looked forward to go there for a long time. Hong Kong, which is coastal city in China, impressed me with its high building. The sky was blue and the air was fresh, which were that relaxed me. I enjoy taking a walk along the beach while my mother liked reading her book, laying on her chair. I also liked surfing in the sea with my father, who tried hardly to keep her balance. How excited the experience was!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My parents and I go on a road trip along G318 in this summer. It is the longest national highway in China from Shanghai to Tibet, along that we enjoyed many famous place of interest. Of all the places, the scenery from Sichuan to Tibet impressed us much. We saw the blue sky but white clouds. With the fresh air refreshed our body and mind, we felt quite relaxed. In addition, the custom of the local people enabled us to have a deeply understanding of our motherland and people. This 10-day journey left them with a strong memory. What wonderful journey it was!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
刪除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Welcome to the world of ice and snow! The winter wonderland is a influential tourist attraction of Harbin. Here, exciting is the easiest thing to find. This year’s seasonal theme park covering an area of over 800,000 square meters. And it’s made up of thousands of massive ice carvings and some entertain activities. Climbing to the top of the Ice and Snow World, I realized why Harbin could have so a successful story. It is Harbin where local residents will be give free rides to visitors. It is Harbin where authorities will prepare non-slip carpets or public warming shelters. It is Harbin where you can total enjoy yourself with no worries at all. When it comes to using winter tourism to boost it economy, Harbin seems have already taken the first step.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a bright sunny day today. I went to the Bangalore railway station meet my uncle and aunt, that were coming from Mumbai. When my father and I were careful crossing the Orion mall, we saw three elephants, reminding me with my Kerala trip.
Last year we went to Kerala for a trip, where we were visited five beautiful cities. Then seating on an elephant for two and a half hour, we went to Elephant Junction Thekkady. After that, we feed several elephants and took a lot of pictures with it. It was so a nice trip that I will not forget it forever.