增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a little boy, I was always hoping to visit Tian’anmen Square. My dream finally comes true last summer vacation. Although there was a shower, but the rain stopped soon and the sun came out quickly. More and more people came to the square to breathing the cool and fresh air. Suddenly some people shouted excited. I noticed much of them were looking up into the sky. I did same and saw a beautiful rainbow, what was like a seven-colored bridge, hanging in the sky. See a symbol of good fortune during my visit to my favorite place, I felt very pleasing. The unforgettable experience will always stay in our mind.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our class paid a visit the Culture Museum in our city last week. To begin with, we searched for as more information as possible on the Internet. Feeling excitedly, we gathered at the entrance on Friday morning. Then a guide was showed us the exhibition of paper cuts designing for different uses. After that, we watched a digital film, what made us know our folk culture better. Finally, we go to the do-it-yourself area. We learned to make some paper cuts or painted a couple of fantastic mask then. We all felt it was a unforgettable experience and the museum was certainly worth a visit.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After I graduated from junior high school, my parents and I go to Thailand for a trip. It was my the most unforgettable trip. I enjoyed so delicious fresh fruit and seafood that I was unwilling go home. While going for sightseeing, I saw the beautiful sunset on the beach and met much local people. They could speak fluently Chinese and English, which made me surprising. This trip not only taught me a lot of knowledge who I had never learned in books, but opened your eyes to a new world. As the saying goes, “It's nice to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a little boy, I was always hoping visit Tian’anmen Square. Now the day has final come and I shall never forget it. Yesterday afternoon I paid the visit to Tian’anmen Square. Although there was a shower, but very soon the rain stopped and the sun came out. More and more people come to the square to enjoying the cool and fresh air. Suddenly some people shouted excitedly. I noticed much of them were looking up into the sky. I saw a beautiful rainbow, what was like a seven-colored bridge, hanging in the sky. A man said, “The rainbow is a symbol of fortune.” On heard this, I felt very happy. It will always stay in our mind.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. You've made a wise choose to travel there. As we all know it, Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions, enjoy many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou is well-known as its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clearly and looks colorful. It can excite visitors' imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It is built twenty century ago. And it is still playing so important part in irrigation today. Beside, the nice weather and convenience transportation there can make your trip more enjoyable.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was very glad to have an excellent chance to visit and studied in Beijing last year. It is one of largest and most attractive city in the world. It offers visitors thousands of things to do, included visiting museums, beautiful parks but historical sites. I soon fell in love to Beijing because of their rich culture and history. I liked having a cup of black tea and walking along the river in the afternoon.
More important, people in Beijing were so friendly that they were always kindly helped me whenever I was in trouble. I will never forget my interested days in Beijing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to England for a trip. I arrived London on the 9th , December. But I didn’t know a way to my hotel. So I asked for a man. I talked in English very carefully and clearly. But the man couldn’t understand. I repeated my question several time and at last he understood. He answered me but he spoke either slowly nor clearly. I could not understand her words. My teacher never spoke English like it. The man and I looked at each other and smiled. Then he said anything. I understood by the end. How happy I was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ^ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I've always been dreaming of visiting Chicago. Last summer I took trip there on my own, what got me thinking about the advantages of travelling alone. Something that I noticed immediately was the fact that I had the free to do what I wanted. After all, I don't have to consider another person's interests. While in Chicago, I got involving in a couple of workshops. During these workshops, we got the chance to talk with the local people. Days late, I went to the theatre alone and found myself having a conversation about travel with the lady sit beside me. To be honest, these conversations wouldn't have been happened if I had travelled without a friend.
Dear Steve,
I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many question in your letter, and now let me answer them.
To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history. You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the Beijing roast duck. I hope we will enjoy it. Besides , there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots had attracted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Liu Chao
Guilin is in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, China, famous of its mountains and water. I went here last summer and stayed for five day. During that time not only I enjoy the fascinating scenery like the unique mountains and clean rivers, but also I try the traditional weaving of the Zhuang people. That impressed me most was the amazing folk-song-singing competition on the Li River, which attracted thousands of visitors or locals. Guilin enjoys a worldwide fame for it beautiful scenery, so it's well worth visiting. I am strongly recommend you visiting it: I believe you will have a wonderfully time.
