增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I decided to visit Hong Kong for our holidays in last summer. I was very happy because I looked forward to go there for a long time. Hong Kong, which is coastal city in China, impressed me with its high building. The sky was blue and the air was fresh, which were that relaxed me. I enjoy taking a walk along the beach while my mother liked reading her book, laying on her chair. I also liked surfing in the sea with my father, who tried hardly to keep her balance. How excited the experience was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Today, my family and I went hiking in the mountain where is rich in wildlife. We had a great time explored the beautiful scenery. We set out early in the morning, full equipped with snacks and water. During the climb, we watch the wildlife and took many photo. Besides, we have had a picnic lunch at the top of the mountain and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings.
Personally, I felt a great sense of satisfaction after succeeding reaching the top. Though tiring, I considered them worth my time. Spending time with family in nature brought us much close to each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, mine parents and I climbed Mountain Tai to see the sunrise. At 4:30 on the morning we were already on the top, wait for the sun to rise. At first, a ray of sunshine appeared in the east, and then it became bright and brighter. Sudden, the sun sprang out, looking like a large ball, and the sky in the east became red. Later, the sun was blocking by a piece of cloud. When it appeared again, and the sun changed from red to bright red, and then to golden. As it rose, it became silvery white and shone out. The sun was so bright that we couldn’t looked at it directly. At that time, whole mountain was in the golden sunlights.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Have you thought about traveling to China? Plan a trip to China with family takes on a different meaning. It can be such an eye opener which you will get a new picture of China.
Our trip with my family to China started last year. We were impressed by the rich culture and beautiful scenery. Apart from that, we were all witnessed the impressed changes of this land. We ride one of the fastest trains in the world and it took only 5 minutes to get the airport in Shanghai. Most interesting, we paid by mobile phones and were amazed at the huge conveniences brought by this “new” technology. It was the unique experience we’d never forget.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After long flight, I finally arrived in Sanya. I spent my days explore the beautiful beaches, trying new food, or meeting people from all over the world. I even got to participate in a local dragon dance performance, that was a highlight of my trip. Although I were away from my family, I didn’t feel lonely. I met many friendly locals who welcomed me into his homes and showed me the truly meaning of the Spring Festival. I learned about the customs and tradition of the area, and even have a traditional New Year’s Eve dinner with a local family. My journey to Sanya was a trip that I would always remember about.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
This summer I take a trip to the undersea world, which turned out extreme fantastic.
The first thing I became aware was all the vivid colors surrounding me. Seeing so extraordinary beauty, I found my heart beat wildly and every cell in my body waking up. I began to explore the fantastic coral. Suddenly, I caught a sight of an eel (鳗鱼) with its heads showing from a hole watching for tasty food. I felt scared to death but fled away. However, when I looked down into the deep of the ocean, I felt like discovering a whole new dimension of life.
Exposing to such deep clear water, I found my trip awesome!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On a recent weekend, my family had so many fun in Huangshandian village. The village, attracted more than 400, 000 tourist arrivals on average every year, becomes a hot spot thanks to it’s country lifestyle. We took a part in adventures in the mushroom house and the outdoor pumpkin rolling classes in the morning. Then, we picked eggs, dig up sweet potatoes and ran after chickens in the field. It was calm at night, but we set a big campfire and a group tourists gathered round it, singing and dancing happily. My son who has never done farm work before said it was so different from that they did in school. He told me he couldn’t wait to go here again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, I went to the Happy Valley with my classmates. We were divided into eight group, with 5 people in each one. It took us an hour to get here by bus. On the way to the Wild Fjord, we were very exciting to see beautiful trees or clear water. Then we went to the Lost Maya, which was a great shock to them. It appeared as if we had transported to the ancient times. After that, we went to Shangrila, which beauty took away our breath. At about 12: 00, we felt hunger and had lunch in a nearby restaurant. After a rest, we go to the small Roller Coaster and the Frog Jumps, where we had a great fun. What an unforgettable experience!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
While traveling in England, my friend and I met a nice and young man calling Alain. In the days before the Internet and social media, it was common to exchange address upon departing and say, “Come and visit if you’re in an area.” So, two days later, we actual accepted his offer. We knocked on his door, just thinking about we’d have a cup of tea and a nice chat. And to our surprise, his lovely mum cooked a delicious dinner for ourselves! Then, we invited to stay the night! We had fun trying to speak French with his wife, which couldn’t speak English. It was an interested evening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m having wonderful time here in France. Now I’m drinking fröccs in one of the open-air café. The first day when we went on a guided tour of Paris. We saw most of the famous sights like the Louvre, where they have an amazed collection of paintings, but the Eiffel Tower. Yesterday we went down to the South of France by train. It was such fast that the whole journey was only about three hours. We spend a little time in Nice and in Cannes as well, and we all real enjoyed the journey. I practiced speak my French a little and I spoke them when I did shopping.
