增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, I went to the Happy Valley with my classmates. We were divided into eight group, with 5 people in each one. It took us an hour to get here by bus. On the way to the Wild Fjord, we were very exciting to see beautiful trees or clear water. Then we went to the Lost Maya, which was a great shock to them. It appeared as if we had transported to the ancient times. After that, we went to Shangrila, which beauty took away our breath. At about 12: 00, we felt hunger and had lunch in a nearby restaurant. After a rest, we go to the small Roller Coaster and the Frog Jumps, where we had a great fun. What an unforgettable experience!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( Ʌ), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(__), 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限-词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Travelling is good activity. When you’re tiring from your work or studies and when you’re freely, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoying the beauty of nature. You can breathe fresh air and made new friends.
But sometimes, travelling will cause some problem. The weather change quickly. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while travelling.
Therefore, you should prepare myself carefully before a trip. You should listen to the weather forecast but prepare for the bad weather. You’d better to find a companion so that you can help each other and may avoid accidents.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a warm March morning that I went on a trip to Yangzhou. I met two Americans but became their guide. First, we went to the Shouxi Lake, there they wanted to look around the river by the boat. After bought the tickets, we got into the boat and saw the beautiful sight. Second, we go shopping. The sellers couldn’t speak English. Though it was very harder, I managed to translate their sentences. They bought some little things with their help. At last, we went to a small zoo and took some photo. If I had not studied English hard, I couldn’t have had so a meaningful trip.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my last summer holiday where I visited Washington State with Tom. We went camp in the forest. It was a little of cold but in October the season brought lots of differently colors to the trees. Everything looks just beautiful. Later, we saw the snowy mountains and began to drive at foot of the mountains and finally they arrived in the desert. It was a sunny day and the scenery were beautiful. I loved walking along the country roads here, with trees on both sides. I also had a pleasant time with my friends in a restaurant.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was happy that I took guided tour of the Summer Palace on Sunday with my classmates and teachers. We go there by coach. The scenery was too beautiful that we took a great number of picture there. Then we walked around the lake, listen to the guide talking about the history of it. The Summer Palace was special designed. After three hours, we were hungry so we ate and drank that we brought with us. We were soon full with energy. We decided to climb the Longevity Hill. We all felt delightedly when we were on the top of it. Although we were tired, but we really had a good time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My parents and I spent five days in Beijing last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit Beijing. The weather is usually cool or there aren't too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn't understand the bus routes, and my parents didn't enjoy travelled by underground. We both went shopping in Wangfujing Street and spend too much money. What we liked most were going to the theater. We don't have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
How are things going? I can’t wait to tell you the good news what my family will take a trip to England this winter. My father often say that it will be a good chance for me to experience English culture. The journey will be tired and long. We will take a flight at midnight. It will be dark all the way to England, but we can see nothing through the windows. We will stay at there for two weeks. Could you offer me some advices on where to stay, what to eat and how to travel in such short time? I’d appreciate you if you can provide me with some necessary information. I’m sure your suggestions will surely make my visit comfortably.
I’m looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Max
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was very glad to have an excellent chance to visit and studied in Beijing last year. It is one of largest and most attractive city in the world. It offers visitors thousands of things to do, included visiting museums, beautiful parks but historical sites. I soon fell in love to Beijing because of their rich culture and history. I liked having a cup of black tea and walking along the river in the afternoon.
More important, people in Beijing were so friendly that they were always kindly helped me whenever I was in trouble. I will never forget my interested days in Beijing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In May, I went in holiday to Paris with my friend Lily. We had a great time here, In the first few day, we spent a lot time visiting tourist sites. We saw many beautiful places like the Eiffel Tower, Notre Dame or other places of interest. I took hundreds of photos. One day we got lost on their way back to a hotel. It didn’t matter because we had found a really good market. We bought many interested gifts for our friends and family. Although we spent a lot, we felt very happy. I thought Paris was a great city to visiting.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer I go to Hangzhou with two Americans. I became their guide. First, we went to the West Lake, that is a famous place of interest in Hangzhou. We looked around it by the boat. After that, we went shop. The sellers couldn’t spoke English. Though it was very hard, I tried my best to listen their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought many things with my help. Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures. When we felt hungry, you went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old house. All of us had a greatly time that day.