增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer I go to Hangzhou with two Americans. I became their guide. First, we went to the West Lake, that is a famous place of interest in Hangzhou. We looked around it by the boat. After that, we went shop. The sellers couldn’t spoke English. Though it was very hard, I tried my best to listen their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought many things with my help. Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures. When we felt hungry, you went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old house. All of us had a greatly time that day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went to Thai-style restaurant for lunch with my sister. When we arrived at 1.40, we had to wait 20 minutes because they got our table ready. We ordered the chips as a side dish and they look delicious. But when we tasted them, they were overcooked and swim in oil so we left most of them. We expected a lot of more for $10!
When the waiter asked if anything was OK, we said we really didn't like chips and he said 'That's funny, I love them and that was it. He didn't offer us anything else or take them on our bill. Also, when we didn't leave a tip, he looked annoying.
I was really excited about visiting Vega, and the main were just fantastic, and the rest of the experience was really disappointing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\），在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用横线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The Olympic Games will be held in our country in four years' time. As a great many of people will be visiting the country, the government will be building new hotels, a immense stadium, but a new Olympic-standard swimming pool. They will also be building new road and a special railway line. The Games will be held just outside the capital and the whole area will be called 'Olympic City'. Workers will have complete the new roads at the end of this year. By the end of next year, they will have finished work on the new stadium. The fantastic modern buildings have been designed by Kurt Gunter. Everybody will be watching anxious as the new buildings go up. We are all very exciting and are looking forward the Olympic Games so they have never been held before in this country.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I have just receive a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been to there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is work for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different place in Australia. He has just bought an Australia car and has gone to Alice springs, a small town in centre of Australia. He will soon visits Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. His brother has never been abroad before, but he is finding this trip very excited.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is the result of our discuss about traveling. Some students chose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won't get the lost and they don't need to look for hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That's because they can arrange their time free and have a choice to visit their favorite tourist spot. What's more, it's a chance for them to learn to look after ourselves.
For me, I'd like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the place which I like. On this way, I can enjoy the vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The first time I go away from home without my parents was at the age of ten. I went on a school trips with my class to the zoo in Chengdu. We left home very early to see anything clear in the morning fog. That was because they had a long journey to cover. Having travelled to Chengdu by bus, and we spent the whole day at the zoo. I can remember seeing an elephant for the first time, was very impressive! At midday, we ate our picnic lunch in a park near the zoo. After lunch, while visited the reptile house, we saw the snakes and was well impressed with the huge sea turtles. At five o'clock, we got on the bus and returned home. What enjoyable a day!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mary,
I’m more than delighting to know you are going to explore the Yangtze River, one of the Mother Rivers of Chinese civilizations.
In my view, only if you take the trip to the Yangtze River can you have better knowledge of the history of China. Naturally, along the river is many attractive scenic spots, all of them are heavy with legends. Every rock looked like a person or animal, and every stream join the great river carries its legends.Taking advantage of the trip, and you will not only have a good view of the surrounding sceneries but also broaden your horizons.
I really hope we will get a kick out of the trip to the Yangtze River, which will definitely impress on you.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m having wonderful time here in France. Now I’m drinking fröccs in one of the open-air café. The first day when we went on a guided tour of Paris. We saw most of the famous sights like the Louvre, where they have an amazed collection of paintings, but the Eiffel Tower. Yesterday we went down to the South of France by train. It was such fast that the whole journey was only about three hours. We spend a little time in Nice and in Cannes as well, and we all real enjoyed the journey. I practiced speak my French a little and I spoke them when I did shopping.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend, I visit the People's Park with my parents. We were enjoying the fantastic scenery around while I noticed anything unpleasant happening. A young couple were taking some photo on the grass. The man was shouting excitedly, "How beautiful!" They completely forgot what they should bear in mind when travelling or ignored the sign say “ Keep off the grass ". What shame! Such behavior left me deep on thought. If all visitors to the People's Park do as the couple did so, the park will be severe damaged and become messy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was in a hot summer holiday which I visited Qingdao, port city in Shandong Province. My favourite sport is swimming, so I decide to go swimming in the sea one afternoon with my friend, Wang Fei and Li Lei.
It was the first time that I had swum in the sea , with waves come one after another to the shore and making great noises. Facing the rough sea, I felt a bit worrying and nearly gave up at first. And when I saw many people enjoying myself in the water, my fear was reducing. At last I joined in the swimmers. Now I still remember what wonderful swimming in the sea was.
