增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We had a school trip last Sunday. Hundreds of us took part in it excited.
At 8:00 a. m., we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in highly spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful scenery. When someone fall behind, others would come to offer help. About two hour later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot of. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed us. What wonderful experience!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多若(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is the result of our discuss about traveling. Some students chose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s because they can arrange their time free and have a choice to visit their favorite tourist spot. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after ourselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the place in which I like. In this way, I can enjoy the vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
How have you been lately? You said you want to know about the Great Wall. I’m happily to tell you about them here. The Great Wall was build more than two thousand years ago. It is 8,851.8 kilometers long, six to seven meters high but four to five meters wide. The Great Wall, that represents the long history of China, is great wonder created to protect the ancient Chinese people. Now the Great Wall have become one of the most famous attractions in China, and it attracts a large number of visitor from all around the world each year.
I hope you can come to China to visit the Great Wall on one day. I’m sure you will love it.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I visited Mountain Tai with several classmate today. We arrived at the foot of Mountain Tai on half past nine and spend nearly one hour in climbing. We could see flowers and grass all the way up and the air in the mountain smelt very freshly. We did not feel tiring at all. When we got to the top, and we were all wet with sweat. We sat under a tall tree to have rest, drinking some water and eating anything. There were several temples in the mountain. We enjoyed the scenery for a long time because we had never seen it ago. It were really a beautiful mountain.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I wanted to visit Hangzhou before returning back to London. One of my tasks were to decide where to go. I took out my guidebook that there was lots of informations about the city’s famous sights. At that moment, the attractive young lady came up to me and introduced himself. She offered to show me the city. She suggested we first go to the West Lake and walk along the Broken Bridge. I liked the idea. Therefore, I was worried about crossing the Broken Bridge. If it were broken, I would fell in and drown. It was probable not a good idea, so I politely refused her invitation, closing my book and walked away.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last month, I, together with my parents, were invited to my uncle’s in the USA. My uncle,who moved America when I was five, has been lived there for nearly ten years. He meets us at the airport. I was exciting when I set foot on the land of America. In the following days, we visited some place of interest and took photos in the front of the Statue of Liberty. We all enjoyed visit the Museum of Natural History because it great enriched our knowledge. For me, this is one of the most rewarding trip I have ever made in my life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Chengdu is known for a “laid-back” city. A relaxing teahouse culture and a lively nightlife that mix beer bars and Sichuan opera shows contribute to their unique charm. Hundreds of Sichuan dishes and spicy hotpots sure impress visitors. If lucky enough, one can see mountains cover by snow from the city even in summer, which is one of the most amazing sight there. The city increased green space since 2009 as a result of an air pollution. With over 10 million tourists visit the city every year, Chengdu has so much to offer. Unless you have time, you may go there to explore it by yourself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took a trip to China a few months before. It was a wonderful experience where is beyond description. We spent three weeks visit Beijing, Shanghai and several other tourist attraction. The closer we approached the center of China, the much I liked it. Then we went to Hong Kong last week, which I think is different with Beijing. It is noisiest place I have ever seen. And another thing that give me a deep impression was the people in China—they were so much friendly. Anyway, the trip itself was interested. I can't wait to flying to China again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改；在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This winter holiday, I go to Beijing with my father. It was the first time that I had been to our capital city. It left a deep impression with me. First I went to the Great Wall. It is more than 6,000 kilometers longer. The Great Wall was built over two thousands years ago. It built to keep the enemy out of the nation. Then I went to the Forbidden City, what is located in the center of Beijing. I spent about three hours walking around, reading and enjoying the exhibits of there. Various collections there were very interested, especially the ancient bronze exhibit. There seemed to have endless things to see. I had a wonderful winter holiday and I am looking forward to visit Beijing again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Tourists climb for two hours to reach the top of a mountain in Peru, struggled for breath. But they are happy to see the beautiful sceneries there. Lines of rich colors form that has become known as “Rainbow Mountain”. The colors come from special rock remains. It’s five years since the world has learned of the existence of this natural wonder.
Many people come to see them. To villagers who take up their traditional transport trade, the bigger difference is that they now move tourists instead goods. Tourism has provided much-needed economic help for an area. Environmentalists, besides, fear tourists will destroy everything which makes this place distinctive.
