增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\),在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用横线划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The Olympic Games will be held in our country in four years' time. As a great many of people will be visiting the country, the government will be building new hotels, a immense stadium, but a new Olympic-standard swimming pool. They will also be building new road and a special railway line. The Games will be held just outside the capital and the whole area will be called 'Olympic City'. Workers will have complete the new roads at the end of this year. By the end of next year, they will have finished work on the new stadium. The fantastic modern buildings have been designed by Kurt Gunter. Everybody will be watching anxious as the new buildings go up. We are all very exciting and are looking forward the Olympic Games so they have never been held before in this country.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I have just receive a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been to there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is work for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different place in Australia. He has just bought an Australia car and has gone to Alice springs, a small town in centre of Australia. He will soon visits Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. His brother has never been abroad before, but he is finding this trip very excited.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Chengdu is known for a “laid-back” city. A relaxing teahouse culture and a lively nightlife that mix beer bars and Sichuan opera shows contribute to their unique charm. Hundreds of Sichuan dishes and spicy hotpots sure impress visitors. If lucky enough, one can see mountains cover by snow from the city even in summer, which is one of the most amazing sight there. The city increased green space since 2009 as a result of an air pollution. With over 10 million tourists visit the city every year, Chengdu has so much to offer. Unless you have time, you may go there to explore it by yourself.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took a trip to China a few months before. It was a wonderful experience where is beyond description. We spent three weeks visit Beijing, Shanghai and several other tourist attraction. The closer we approached the center of China, the much I liked it. Then we went to Hong Kong last week, which I think is different with Beijing. It is noisiest place I have ever seen. And another thing that give me a deep impression was the people in China—they were so much friendly. Anyway, the trip itself was interested. I can't wait to flying to China again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tourists climb for two hours to reach the top of a mountain in Peru, struggled for breath. But they are happy to see the beautiful sceneries there. Lines of rich colors form that has become known as “Rainbow Mountain”. The colors come from special rock remains. It’s five years since the world has learned of the existence of this natural wonder.
Many people come to see them. To villagers who take up their traditional transport trade, the bigger difference is that they now move tourists instead goods. Tourism has provided much-needed economic help for an area. Environmentalists, besides, fear tourists will destroy everything which makes this place distinctive.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, I took a trip to Chengdu with a tour group.
In the way, we stopped at a shopping center build several years ago. It was not long after I felt bored, so I decided to go out for a walk. I was going down a street when I caught sight of an old man sitting on the sidewalk. Dressing in rags, he was such dirty that I could smell him from several feet away. Although I didn't raise his head, but I could see the sadness in his eyes. I bend down and handed some of my money to him. Moved my behaviour, he kept saying “thank you”.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The first time I go away from home without my parents was at the age of ten. I went on a school trips with my class to the zoo in Chengdu. We left home very early to see anything clear in the morning fog. That was because they had a long journey to cover. Having travelled to Chengdu by bus, and we spent the whole day at the zoo. I can remember seeing an elephant for the first time, was very impressive! At midday, we ate our picnic lunch in a park near the zoo. After lunch, while visited the reptile house, we saw the snakes and was well impressed with the huge sea turtles. At five o'clock, we got on the bus and returned home. What enjoyable a day!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)花掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to Shapotou in last weekend. Having told about the history of Ning Xia, he was amazing at this wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the mixture of sand and water. I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activities of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign her name. Both Shapotou and the Ning Xia people deep impressed him so he decides to visit more places of interest when free.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last trip to Japan, I have a chance to visit in the most famous amusement park in the world, Nara Dreamland. Building in 1961, Nara Dreamland was supposed to be the “Disney" theme park of the country, that was easy to recognize when you took a look at the fairy pink princess castle. The tourist attraction was successfully and many Japanese went there during its free time. It was amazing thing to be able to explore the wonderful parks. I had a deep impression in how exciting it was to be on the roller coaster or how comfortable it was to wander in the little streets of this park.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every year, a great much holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation.While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which cause a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heating topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manner. First, we must respect and follow locally customs. Besides, we'd better talk loudly in public places to avoid disturb others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear at mind that we are representing our country while abroad, but we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well as.