增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多若(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is the result of our discuss about traveling. Some students chose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s because they can arrange their time free and have a choice to visit their favorite tourist spot. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after ourselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the place in which I like. In this way, I can enjoy the vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I wanted to visit Hangzhou before returning back to London. One of my tasks were to decide where to go. I took out my guidebook that there was lots of informations about the city’s famous sights. At that moment, the attractive young lady came up to me and introduced himself. She offered to show me the city. She suggested we first go to the West Lake and walk along the Broken Bridge. I liked the idea. Therefore, I was worried about crossing the Broken Bridge. If it were broken, I would fell in and drown. It was probable not a good idea, so I politely refused her invitation, closing my book and walked away.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用斜线（\））划掉。
修改∶在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer, I went on the trip to Qingdao, where I stayed for seven days and enjoyed myself. Before leave Qingdao, I went fishing on a beautiful lake. Unlucky, I didn't catch any fishes, and I got boring. I decided to go swimming. When I stood up, my wallet with all my money in fell into the water. I jump into the deep lake to look for it, so I found nothing. The next morning, I wasn't able to leave the hotel because of I had no money to pay for anything. I had no choice but call my parents and asked for help. They sent myself some money by WeChat. How an embarrassing trip!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was very glad to have an excellent chance to visit and studied in Beijing last year. It is one of largest and most attractive city in the world. It offers visitors thousands of things to do, included visiting museums, beautiful parks but historical sites. I soon fell in love to Beijing because of their rich culture and history. I liked having a cup of black tea and walking along the river in the afternoon.
More important, people in Beijing were so friendly that they were always kindly helped me whenever I was in trouble. I will never forget my interested days in Beijing.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改；在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This winter holiday, I go to Beijing with my father. It was the first time that I had been to our capital city. It left a deep impression with me. First I went to the Great Wall. It is more than 6,000 kilometers longer. The Great Wall was built over two thousands years ago. It built to keep the enemy out of the nation. Then I went to the Forbidden City, what is located in the center of Beijing. I spent about three hours walking around, reading and enjoying the exhibits of there. Various collections there were very interested, especially the ancient bronze exhibit. There seemed to have endless things to see. I had a wonderful winter holiday and I am looking forward to visit Beijing again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear David,
I am so pleased learn that you will spend some time in China.
I recommend you stayed in Beijing, a capital and cultural center of China. The city enjoys a high reputation for it's abundance of ancient architecture, .that represents the traditional local lifestyles. But there are also plenty of museums in where precious relics of historical interest are waiting for you to explore. Beside, the exceptional Peking Opera performances here are also what you can't miss.
I wish you a very happy or meaningful time in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词或形式。
Recent, we have discussed the ways of traveling. Here is the result. Some students choose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s why they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite tourist spots. What’s more, it’s a chance for us to learn to look after themselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I wanted to spend enough time visiting the place where I like. In this way, I can enjoy a vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, I went to Shangri-la for travel. It was the nice trip, during which I not only saw the beautiful scenery, and also made a good friend. She was come from England and was a middle school student either. We met in the tourist site where she asked me to translate which she said. Though my English was not very good, I can still understand what she said. Then we talked a lot while appreciated sights all the way. She told me about her joy trip in China. I listened to her carefully and I was attracted by her different kinds of story. Now we still keep touch with each other by email.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My brother and I went on a one-day trip to the West Lake in Hangzhou the last month.It takes us four hours to drive there.As soon as we got out the car,we were surprised by the beauty scenery there.Then we took a boat and enjoyed a delightful tour.When appreciated the scene,we took a lot of photos.After that,they went to a souvenir shop to choosing presents for our friends.Then we tasted the local food in a restaurant near the shops.Six hours had passed after we realized it.Finally we had to return home at about four o'clock in the afternoon.What a pleasant but interesting day it was.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer, my parents and I took a trip to Shanghai, one of the popular cities in the world. Our first destination was Shanghai Disneyland, which we experienced a magical world. My dream came true—I met a number of Disney cartoon character: To our disappointment, there were such many tourists that we had to push their way to go through the crowd. The next day, we paid a visit Oriental Pearl Radio and TV Tower, Standing on the top of a tower with my family, I have a feeling of excitement. We took many pictures in there.
Tired and happy, I really enjoyed the two-day trip.
