文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I am so exciting that I can’t wait to share with you what I experienced today. I gave my first lesson in our school, that left me a deep impression. When I entered into the classroom, the students were making much noise. I stood at the door, not knew what to do at first. But soon I realized everything must be done. I asked the kids they liked the English songs. They all say “Yes”. I sang the English song. For my surprise, all the kids began to focus their attentions. All of them had a wonderful English lesson.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏宇符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear friends,
I, on behalf our school, would like to express our warm welcome to Mr. Ken Hyland, our distinguished guest. We are lucky to have him to visit our school.
Which is known to us all, being a world famous English linguist, he had written lots of books. I have read many of his books, included Discourse Studies, Teaching and Researching and so on. Today, the remarkable professor is invited to our school to deliver a lecture on English study, which is a opportunity for us to promote our English. Meanwhile, if you have any questions on English, you can ask him for help. I do believe his shining ideas will be benefit to you．
We wish you, all the guest here, good health and a pleasant journey. Now a wonderful lecture from Mr. Ken Hyland is eager expected and let’s express your sincere welcome once again．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone should take the action to reduce haze (雾霾), which is harmless to our health. First of all, I believe that if we plant more tree, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes (尾气) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people’s health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they make short journeys.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多若(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is the result of our discuss about traveling. Some students chose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look up hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That’s because they can arrange their time free and have a choice to visit their favorite tourist spot. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to learn to look after ourselves.
For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the place in which I like. In this way, I can enjoy the vacation better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirty and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must find ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you had advertised for. Personally, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledges and experience, but it can make the visitors all over the world to know better about our culture.
On one hand, have a good command of English, I can communicate with foreign people freely. On the other hand, in the past three years I have taken part in many activities, in that I performed well and gained rich experience. More importantly, my skills in teamwork and sports contribute for my application for the job. I believe I can do a good job for the games. My promise is to offer the best serve possible to the people at the games. Hope the games will be great success.
I would be very gratefully if you could give him a chance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am exciting and can’t wait to share with you an unforgettable experience. The lesson that I gave it for the first time will live in my memory forever. Seeing a young teacher enter the classroom, some of my student began to make much noise. I stood on the platform, feeling nervously and not knowing what to do. Then I realize that something must be done. I asked the kids whether they were fond English songs. After take a deep breath, I sang a song. To my surprise, all kids were such interested that they started focusing on my class. Now I have much confidence than before and realize the importance of staying calm. However, if you meet problems in the future, don’t worry. Believe in yourself and solutions will come up soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr Green,
I have returned to my motherland. Thanks to your help, I have made a great progress in my English study in your country for half a year. However, you advised me eat more vegetables and fruits instead of junk food and I am healthy than before.
You said you are interested in Chinese traditional festival. Now let me tell you everything about the Qingming Festival. It falls in April 5th every year and people go to clean graves in honor of the dead.
I hope you and your wife will pay a visit to China during the Mid-Autumn Festival which you can admire the moon and enjoy the moon cakes.
I’m looking forward to receive your letter!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, I was on my way back home while I saw a young man painting a picture on a tree. I felt very surprising, so I went up to see more clear. He told me that he was art student. He spent his free time drawing pictures on trees, hoped to make the city more beautiful. His words encouraged me so much that I was volunteered to help him. He said it took him about one and a half hour to finish a picture. By the time I met him, he has finished ten pictures of his own. After that, they often worked together and became good friends.
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Qi Baishi (1946-1957) was one of China’s great painter. He worked with wood during his early youth.Then between 1902 and 1909, he travelled across the country and painted many picures of scenery. His interest changed later simple pictures from everyday life, such as vegetables, flowers, birds, and insects. Cabbage is a well-known example of Qi’s works. The tiny insect near the cabbage has some red on it back. Its black eyes, which are fix on the cabbage, shows the creature’s interest in the vegetable. Qi Baishi’s style of paint often leaves the audience guess and makes them to use their imagine.
