1. Nowadays, it is common in China that some people tend to run the red light in group when crossing the street.
2. Actually, running the red light are quite dangerous.
3. As the saying go, treat others as you would like to be treated.
4. Not only cellphones but also the web are necessary for me.
5. Li Ming, one of my best friend, was still not back and his parents were very anxious about him.
6. However, even an hour is of much valuable.
7. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jam.
8. My son, life is like a battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.
9. One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.
10. Meanwhile, volunteer travel enrich your life by offering different jobs in youth hostels.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Zhou Yang will never forgot his first assignment at the office of China Daily. At the first time Hu Xin, his new boss, sent him with a experienced reporter and a photographer to cover the story. Before went out to work, his boss told her to be curious and must have a “nose” for the story. In order to grasp the detailed facts Zhou Yang should listen the interviewee carefully. His boss also was advised him to prepare the next question depending on that the person said. His boss told that he can use a small recorder to get the facts straight, if permitting by the interviewee. Finally it can be used to judge if the interviewed person is lying or not.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(^)，并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I want to share my experience and advices on labor with you today. At 8 last Sunday morning, after the breakfast, my mother look me to a garden to plant sunflowers. When asking why we planted sunflowers, she told me it was because they grew towards the sun or never wasted their time of youth. It took years before I came to understand which my mother had meant. When planting the sunflowers, we are in high spirits, talking and laughing happy.
Through this experience, I really realize the important of labor. They can not only strengthen our abilities, but also shape our characters. We should be more aware that labor is helpful with us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are many events that one can not forget them forever. My first exam at primary school is one of the most memorable event. I still remember how I spent a sleepless night.
Therefore, on the following day, I felt extremely tiring and forgot everything I had reviewed. During an exam, my mind went blank, so that I wanted to do was cheat. Thus, when the teacher was turning around, I decide to open my copybook. I was too frightened that my fingers were trembling. Suddenly, my teacher came next to me, put her hand gently on my shoulder and saying softly, “You forgot put away your copybook!” I was real ashamed that day.
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I planned to save money for a trip. My father told to me a local zoo was looking for teenagers to work on the weekend, so I immediate applied for the position. To my delight, I got it. My first tasks was to clean the elephant’s house. Luckily, another girl who had begin working there two weeks before taught me how to do a job and that helped me a lot. Each weekend, I was sent to work with difference animals. What I liked best were feeding the giraffes. Tiring as I was while work hard at the zoo, I felt happy because I got close animals and I also earned a lot.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A few weeks ago, I went to England with my soccer team. I had a great fun. On Saturday, I wake up at 5: 30 and got on the coach immediate with my teammates. It took him to the boat. We headed for Holyhead what is in Wales. After some time we arrived the Ethiad Stadium. We was there to see Man City vs Leicester City. Man City won at last. The match was amazed. Agüero scored four goal. We went to our hotel in Bolton before we watched the match.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We had no lessons on last Saturday. Li Hong and I decided to help the farmers pick apples because they was very busy. We climbed up big apple tree. There were a quantity of apple on the tree. She couldn’t get the apples so they were too high. I carried the ladder for him. Soon we picked much baskets of apples and the trucks arrived. We all helped load the apples onto the trucks. These trucks would carried the apples to the cities and the farmers could get their money back. We were so exciting. The farmers had a harvest time!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On a 28th floor of a 33-storey building downtown, my flat is not grand, and it is cozy. It is furnished with a romantic style and designed to be comfortable. I am proud of are the European-style furniture and the fancy wall papers. Every day I arrange some flowers on the table, which they can give life to the whole flat. The best part of it is the huge balcony on the south side. Stand on the balcony, I can get a brilliant view. What a life! I total run out of words describing how fantastic it is! I loved my flat not only because of the flat itself but also the feeling it bring me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am applying a volunteer position for the games. Personally, I consider me a qualified candidate from the follow three aspects. Firstly, as a sports fan, my sports talents let me to fit in any volunteer position. Secondly, my fluently English will enable me to well understand the needs of sportsmen than others, and thus offer timely help. Thirdly, my voluntary experiences have not only strengthened my team spirit, but also equip me with practical skills and knowledges.
I keep passion for sports, but I hope to make a contribution to this world sports event. I would appreciate it when I am offered this opportunity. I have attached my resume and look forward to an interview.
