增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I adopted the baby dog from an animal shelter. I was impressed by its lovely appearance for the first time I saw it. I brought it home but decided to build a warm home for it. Due to my tight budget, I had to make a cage for it by me. First, I watched various video relevant to making cages. Then I reach the market to buy the materials. After that, I had the materials tying together with strings. About three hours later, the cage set up. I put the dog into the cage. It wagged its tail happy. Although the cage looked strange, I felt satisfying with what I had done.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are many events that one can not forget them forever. My first exam at primary school is one of the most memorable event. I still remember how I spent a sleepless night.
Therefore, on the following day, I felt extremely tiring and forgot everything I had reviewed. During an exam, my mind went blank, so that I wanted to do was cheat. Thus, when the teacher was turning around, I decide to open my copybook. I was too frightened that my fingers were trembling. Suddenly, my teacher came next to me, put her hand gently on my shoulder and saying softly, “You forgot put away your copybook!” I was real ashamed that day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A few weeks ago, I went to England with my soccer team. I had a great fun. On Saturday, I wake up at 5: 30 and got on the coach immediate with my teammates. It took him to the boat. We headed for Holyhead what is in Wales. After some time we arrived the Ethiad Stadium. We was there to see Man City vs Leicester City. Man City won at last. The match was amazed. Agüero scored four goal. We went to our hotel in Bolton before we watched the match.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am applying a volunteer position for the games. Personally, I consider me a qualified candidate from the follow three aspects. Firstly, as a sports fan, my sports talents let me to fit in any volunteer position. Secondly, my fluently English will enable me to well understand the needs of sportsmen than others, and thus offer timely help. Thirdly, my voluntary experiences have not only strengthened my team spirit, but also equip me with practical skills and knowledges.
I keep passion for sports, but I hope to make a contribution to this world sports event. I would appreciate it when I am offered this opportunity. I have attached my resume and look forward to an interview.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 ( \) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划-横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
There was a time when I was addicted to playing phone game all day and all night, caused me to fall asleep in class frequently. One day I was sleeping while my headteacher called my name and it was the fourth time that I have slept in English class. Therefore he severe criticized me. It was not until then I realized I had made such stupid a mistake. While falling far behind, I decided to study hard and caught up with my classmates. With your teacher’s help, I would surely make a great progress in the coming examination.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在右边横线上写出改正后的词。
1. Hurrying up, or you’ll miss the train.
2. Do you know the girl who I just talked with her?
3. It’s raining so hardly, or we would go for a picnic.
4. Mary cannot see the blackboard clearly with hers glasses lost.
5. Rose is our two daughter.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Monday morning, I was cycling along a street in the rush hour on my way an interview for an important job. A yellow car passed by me and sudden stopped. I had to brake my bike hard but of course, I fall. I was such angry that I stopped the driver and kept on shout at him rudely. Fortunately, I was in time for the interview. By a chance, one of my interviewer, the manager of the company, was just the driver of the yellow car. Luckily, the manager was not angry with me for my rude. Instead, he offered me the job. So I said to everyone jokingly that I could tell my manager how I thought of him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary school. Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly-equipped classroom, but I found the teachers impatient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly class atmosphere. I decided to make the best it. I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.