1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are many different signs in the public. They tell you what to do or what not to do in a place. Do you know what they exact mean? For example, if you go to see a film, you should enter the cinema at the ENTRANCE and leave for the EXIT. You will either find NO SMOKING signs in many cinemas. If you visit a museum, don’t take some photos inside the halls. You are not allowed. You will find NO PHOTOS signs in many museum. When you drive a car, don’t park in a street without a NO PARKING sign. Making sure you understood the signs and you won’t get into any trouble.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, a tree planting activity held, which our whole school took an active part in. We set off at 7:00 a.m., and it took them around two hours to get to the planting site. Upon arrival, where came into sight were different varieties of young trees. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for digging holes, and the others for planting young trees. On our face flowed down sweat together with heartfelt smiles and all of us spent a meaningfully weekend. Now seeing to the lines of trees, we have a better understanding of how hard a job is and how precious the trees are. However, we should treasure the trees planted and making efforts to better our world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Li Chen was born into an ordinarily family, but he was raising to be a hardworking and warm-hearted youth. During the fight for COVID-19, he become a volunteer passing on disease prevention knowledges to the community and helping buy food. Li Chen’s communication skills are excellent, and so is his computer and organizational skills. For these reasons, he is in the charge of the student union’s website, that is a very demanding role. However, Li Chen is capable of handle a number of tasks with ease. I’m so happy to have such an outstanding friend who inspires me be a better self.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, there are more and more people who attach great importance relationships in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to developing good relationships among friends. Polite words can be easily said yet always have some unexpected and powerful result in your daily life.
Always saying “please” and “thank you” will make your friends feeling more comfortable and more willingly to offer help when necessary. We all know that one man’s success is based on what he deals with people. Always being grateful for other people’s kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say. The more support you win from other people, the more faster you will move towards your goal.
Remember, be polite to others cost nothing so it’s worth a million dollars.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school hold an online English speech successfully on 21 April, which theme was To The World. Twenty students participated in them and four teachers were invited as judges.
A brief self-introduction video about the competitors was shown on the beginning of the competition. Then each of the competitor delivered a speech about how impressive achievements had been made in our country. Eventual, the competitors answered some questions raising by the judges. Li Hua was defeated all the other competitors, winning the first place.
The competition not only created an opportunity for students practice their English but also cheered up students staying at home.
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Nowadays, some famous tourist attractions are crowded of tourists during the holidays, which makes it possible for tourists to enjoy themselves. It reflects the fact what it is difficult to travel to crowded tourist attractions. Therefore, to travel in the holidays made no sense. That is why many people prefer to stay at home rather than to go out. In my opinion, the government should devote its energies to relieve the stress of tourist attractions. Some effective measure can be taken. For example, the number of tourists to famous tourist attractions should limited and citizens should not travel at a same time. Only in this way can tourists enjoy our holidays.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Today, my family and I went hiking in the mountain where is rich in wildlife. We had a great time explored the beautiful scenery. We set out early in the morning, full equipped with snacks and water. During the climb, we watch the wildlife and took many photo. Besides, we have had a picnic lunch at the top of the mountain and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings.
Personally, I felt a great sense of satisfaction after succeeding reaching the top. Though tiring, I considered them worth my time. Spending time with family in nature brought us much close to each other.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many teenagers have difficult getting along with their fathers. I can fully put myself your shoes, as I once experienced the same problem. You can try the followed suggestions.
Be patient with your father. You two must have misunderstood each another. The key to solve the problem is regular and honest communication. Explain your actions and feelings calmly, listen carefully, and address her concerns. Besides, you should try your best to seeing things from his point of view. Only in these ways can your misunderstandings be clear up. You will learn to back down and how your father will relax. With a little bit of patience and communication, much of these problems can be solved.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
The proverbs I like most is “Where there is a will, there is a way”, what tells that we should stick to our dreams. When in Junior Middle School, I was too poor in my studies that I nearly gave up. And my head-teacher was always there. He gives me confidence every time I lost my heart. He encouraged me with the proverb continuous. Thanks to my teacher, all my efforts paying off and finally I became a top student. Nothing is impossible to a will heart. As long as you keep trying, you’ll make.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The China Tourism Academy released a report say that education tourism has become popular between people of all ages. The development of education tourism promotes the socially education of primary and middle school students, which has also played a important role in blending culture and tourism. The key difference between study travel and other tourism product is that study travel focus on learning while traveling. Study travel dates back the Song and Ming dynasties, where many poets wrote of our experiences on study travels.
Dai Bin, president of the Chinese Tourism Academy, suggested that China would establish national campsites for study travel at places with beautiful natural views and rich cultural heritage.