增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like traveling to different parts of our country during my holiday. One of my most favorite trips is to Tibet. Last winter, I paid a visit to my uncle whom lives in Tibet. I took a train from Lanzhou to Lhasa and the journeys cost me more than 22 hours. At my arrival in Lhasa, my uncle invited me eat some delicious local food. I get a deep impression of the kindness of the locals. It was obviously that everybody lived a happy life. Travel to Tibet gives me strength to change himself. I’m determined to study hard to make contributions to our country from then on.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意: (1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2) 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember my thirteen birthday celebration. Instead of the usually parties, my parents decided to spend the whole day with myself. They took me to a larger bookshop first, in which I spent a long time looking through books and magazines there before selecting those I wanted. Then, we went to the cinema. There were many different movies to watch. We finally choose Fantastic 4. My face lit up when I saw the comfortable seats or the huge screen as well. That was one of the most memorable birthday I had ever had. Although I didn’t have a cake or my friends celebrate it, I was pleasant to do which I wanted that day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^))并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My list of favorite books are long. I read a lot and I just keep finding new favorites. In my family, we often talk about the books we are reading and passing around our favorites. It benefits a whole family.
I discovered how share favorite books can help strength a friendship long ago. When I was a kid, my friend Liz became very sicker and was going to miss a lot of school. I fill a big bag with some of my favorite books for her read. She never forgot that. Today, she lives thousand of miles away from me, but she sometimes e-mails with me about the books she is reading.
4 . 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
I love English so much. It is my favorite subject, because master a foreign language helps me to know more about the world. I always dreamed to travel around the world someday, so the first job is to learn English well. Since my teacher told me that there was an English corner in the square, I felt so exciting to go there. I found there was some foreigners and I felt nervous. At first, I just listened to them. Though I was eager to talk to them, but I was shy and afraid making stupid mistakes. One day, a foreigner talked to me, and she said she had seen me many times and led me to talk to her. Her heart was beating fast, but I started to say out some English word. After a while, we talked natural. I made big progress and took pride with myself.
5 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)，不计分。
James is a athlete. He has a great interested in running. Although he has hurt his ankle many times due to training, but he continues running after he recovers.
James feels that running is a good way of losing weight and keep healthy. It is also a great way of relaxing. When he feels stressed, he will go for a jog clear his mind. After that, he will be able to solving some of the problem that he faces.
For running, James need a good pair of jogging shoes and comfortable clothes. He devotes himself in his every training. James hopes to win a gold medal in the one-hundred-meter race for her country in the near future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many students in our school don’t have enough time do sports. Most of our time is spent on study, which causes some health problem. Thus, our school is held Sunshine Sports activities to improve our physical but mental health. The activities are conducted on every afternoon. We are free to do however we like. The schoolyard is full of laugh and life. As the name suggest, the Sunshine Sports activities make us sunshine boys and girls. Besides, we have a good understanding of sports, friendship as well as team spirit than before. Up to now, the activities had received high praise from both students and teachers.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father often took me to his hospital when I was off school. He showed me what his medical instruments were used. I felt so close to him. However, before I went to high school, somehow I became distantly from him. I was unwilling to talk about him and often disobeyed his rule of staying out with my friends too late. The disagreement was such sharp that neither he nor I knew how to settle them. One day, he talked with me and hoped to mend our relation. With the efforts were made by both sides, we began to understand each other a bit good.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The unforgettable birthday party for him is not one of my birthday but it is my grandfather’s. My uncle held so a big party that all the relatives and friends of his family could get together and enjoyed that wonderful time. The party began at noon and many neighbors had gone to my uncle’s house do their help in the morning. In the afternoon, more people came up many presents for visiting grandpa. My grandpa said that if it was his 60th birthday and this day was the better of his life. You can imagine how touching my grandfather was on that day. Grandpa loved the big lively party.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Football is my favorite sport. I usual play football with my friends after school and join competitions. I have benefited a lot from play football. It helps me keep health and provides me with a way to relax me during stressful school days. Beside, I’ve become braver when facing challenges. It also teaches me good teamwork is the key to success and it has been brought me many friends with a same interest. Therefore, I suggest teenager do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose something what suits us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was a member of a tennis team in our school. One day, I saw a girl was not very friend to her partner, who I could tell were feeling upset and discouraged. See this, I went to the store without the hesitation, purchasing her a cute tennis cap and a chocolate bar. I wrote her in a note, telling her what an awesome teammate but tennis player she was. The next day while she saw me at the door, she said thanks to me. She was so moving that she talked to me for about 45 minute. Hopefully, she felt good after that.
