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I had a great time during my last camping trip. Actual, I didn’t plan to go but some friends ring me at the last minute and invited me. A place was very beautiful, but the beach below was really lovely. We watched the sun went down over the horizon every night. Mary was brought her guitar, and she played very beautifully. It was pleasant to listen her. Unfortunately, John had never gone camping, and he was allergic to tree and flowers. We had to take her to the doctor on the third day and we were really worrying, but he was OK. I’ll never forget the trip.
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It's a long time since we meet last time. I couldn't be happy to hear your intention to come to China for vacation, during which time you will be able to have a taste of our unique “Red Culture”.
Actually, there exist some ideal spots in my hometown what suit your need. The city of Nanchong, situates in the northeast of Sichuan Province, is well-known to a continuous stream of travelers as its scenic view as well as historical significance. With breathtaking scenery or rich “Red Culture” resources, it is certainly my top choice. You can visit a couple of local museum, which will help you have good knowledge of the revolutionary history.
I am sure it will be a wonderful experience and I can't wait to exploring its charm with you.
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2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One night, I was in a workshop with my colleagues. One of them was much old than us, and had just recovered from an illness. He didn’t like Asian food, so he stayed in the hotel while a rest of us went out for dinner. When he came back, I told him which I wanted to take him out wherever he wanted to eat. And he did not want to trouble me. I insisted it was not a problem, and finally we went to a place he will prefer.
After we ended our meal, I decided drop him off at the door of the hotel but not the parking lot, as it was quite cold outside and I didn’t want him to catch a cold. This felt good, and over the next few outings, it felt more nature to tell my colleagues to wait for inside the restaurant while I warmed the car for them. Simple acts like these gave me a lot of joys.
