增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I’m sorry to say that I can’t go to Wuzhen with you as planning. I’m writing to apologize for breaking my promise. I had been expecting to visit Wuzhen with you, where we can get close to the nature and experience local customs. However, I can’t travel recent because I hurt my leg in an accident. That is because I think it is a good choice for us to put away our travel. I will appreciate if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenience for you, shall we travel there during the summer vacations? If not, please keep me informed of what time suited you best in advance.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用斜线（\））划掉。
修改∶在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer, I went on the trip to Qingdao, where I stayed for seven days and enjoyed myself. Before leave Qingdao, I went fishing on a beautiful lake. Unlucky, I didn't catch any fishes, and I got boring. I decided to go swimming. When I stood up, my wallet with all my money in fell into the water. I jump into the deep lake to look for it, so I found nothing. The next morning, I wasn't able to leave the hotel because of I had no money to pay for anything. I had no choice but call my parents and asked for help. They sent myself some money by WeChat. How an embarrassing trip!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The moment we entered the Summer Palace yesterday, Tom and I attracted by its beautiful scenery, and we walked along the beautiful lake happy.
Soon, we noticed a elderly man practicing calligraphy on the ground, in a bucket of water aside. Hold a big writing brush in his hand, he wrote the Chinese character for “longevity”. We as well as other tourist couldn’t help but to admire his skills. To our surprised, the elderly man invited Tom to have a try. With her help, Tom completed his first calligraphy task, the two Chinese characters for “China”, quite successfully. Before we left, we take a photo together to memorize this valuable experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good morning, everyone. It is my honor to stand here and share with something about traveling. Which I’d like to convey is that to travel is also to learn. Take my journey to Xi’an for example. Previous, I did learn something about the city from books and TV programs. Therefore, I didn’t know what wonderful it was until I was there in person. When traveling, we can feel the surrounding with our own eyes, noses and so on, thus broaden our horizons. The picture taken on the Great Wall is good reminder of my happy days when I stay in Xi’an. So everyone, seize every chance or you will start an amazing journey to learn.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I spent five days in Beijing last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit Beijing. The weather is usually cool or there aren't too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn't understand the bus routes, and my parents didn't enjoy travelled by underground. We both went shopping in Wangfujing Street and spend too much money. What we liked most were going to the theater. We don't have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My uncle and his family are living in Florida, America. Last summer, my mother and I flew see them from China. During the time, my uncle took us to many places. We visit the zoo at Dreher Park. There, we saw the number of animals. I real enjoyed the monkeys that made face at us. We went to the Florida Science Museum where there’re many interested collections. We even enjoyed windsurfing at West Palm Beach, which it was extremely amazing! To my delighted, I made a new friend who is a high school student like me and live next door to my uncle. Now they often send emails to each other to exchange our learning methods.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用 (＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
It is excited to visit different places. As you travel, you will see beautiful sceneries and you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Besides, you can get to know the customs and living habits of the local people. Today people are very fond of traveling that tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries. The main reason that people travel is, perhaps, for pleasure. For example, having worked hardly throughout the weekdays, people will go on a trip to the nearby mountains or beaches to have a good rest.
For another example, spending a holiday travel abroad is especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much chance to be away from their homelands. When people return back from their travel, they will generally feel fresh and energetic, ready to work harder. Travel is also one of the best means of learning. You may have read or hear about something, and you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer vacation, I went to Beijing with my parents to watch the flag-raising ceremony. Early in the morning we got up and headed Tian’anmen Square. It was beyond your imagination that there had been a lot of people gathering there, most of whom were teenager. We did nothing but to wait for the event like others after choosing a appropriate watching position. What eagerly I wished there came the grand and inspired moment soon! Ten minutes later, it was the most exciting time that I have experienced ever since.
From stepping ahead to raising the national flag, the PLA showed dignity or firmness. Seeing the flag flying, we couldn’t help sing the national anthem.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出这加的词。
刷除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I’m delight to introduce you something about Chinese cultural heritage.
Hard-working and intelligently, Chinese people have made great contributions to the world civilization. Nowadays, many Chinese cultural heritage sites were preserved very well. If you have a chance to travel to China, I recommend yourself to visit Beijing and Xi’an, where many cultural sites are worth visited. Apart from the cultural heritage sites, the natural scenery in Guilin is such beautiful that you will be deeply impressed. Besides, some simple folk custom in the villages in Yunnan province are likely to remind you the good old days,during which living a harmonious life with the nature in the villages, as you know, are of great benefit.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I travelled to Lijiang in this summer vacation with my parents by plane．The fresh air brought me back to life before I got out of the plane．We first went to the Lijiang Ancient City, where they bought some interesting thing and had a good meal．On the second day, we go to the Yulong snowy mountain．It was my first time that I had seen the snow．I played with the snow happy with my parents．I told that Yulong snow mountain was such famous a place in China that many people came here every year．I was tired but exciting throughout this trip, looking forward to visit Lijiang again!
