增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Hello, everyone. It’s a honor to be here to introduce my hometown—Shanghai to you.
Locating on the east coast of China, Shanghai is one of the largest cities of China. On the one hand, it is known for the business and financial center of China. On the other hand, because its tourist attractions, it has attracted millions of tourist from all over the world. One of the most famous landmarks is the Oriental Pearl Radio &TV Tower. In the North of Shanghai lay the Bund (外滩), one of the symbols of Shanghai. In the terms of food, Yu Garden is worth visiting, which you can enjoy a wide range of local snacks.
All in all, Shanghai is not only of great important to China, but also an attractively city with beautiful scenery. Welcome to Shanghai.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Lily,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll visit China this summer vacation! Knowing that you’re amazing at traditional China, I’d like to recommend my most favourite city, Suzhou to you.
Suzhou, referring as the Venice of the East, is an attractively city located in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. It had been listed by UNESCO as a world cultural heritage. The Classical Gardens are the symbol of the city, there you can have better understanding of China. Because these gardens are not large, they’re unique to their designs. It bring together the beauty of nature, architecture and painting.
I believe you will enjoy your time in Suzhou.
Yours,
Lihua
增加：在缺调处加一个漏字符号(∧）)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My hometown Zhangye, which lies in the northwest of Gansu Province, is a city with rolling hills, valleys and basins. It's beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been growing rapid during the past ten year. New bridges and roads have been setting up and high buildings stood in many parts of the city. The number of schools and hospitals available to people are also on the increase. So there are still some problems, such as like frequent traffic jams and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence on people's daily life. Despite these problems, I am convinced that my hometown will become much beautiful. Time permitting, you are welcome to visit them.
